|Reviews for Beyond Time: Of Diaries and Destiny|
| IcarusToSun chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Wow! You have quite successfully rendered me speechless! Brilliantly done:)
Thank you for sharing this with us:)
| mitts40 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Lovely! Sometimes, I'm as confused as Masen. A lot to wrap your mind around but you did a lovely job with it. Edward's letter at the end...crying! Wonderful story!
PS.I loved both endings. It always amazes me how you authors can think of such intriguing and wonderful things. Thanks for sharing.
| tawelephant chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Ok. So I have not read the story but I just read this and I am in tears. My heart was in my throat. I think I need to go read the story now. Wow.
| annaharding chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
This was a great alternate ending! I, too, prefer the original ending, with Bella coming back to the future, to be with her current Edward, but this was a nice difference.
Thanx - and thanx for supporting good causes!
| garddita17 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Wow. I loved your original ending but this alternate ending is equally amazing. Now I get to imagine Edward and Bella having both their happy endings.
| Twilightlvr1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
You're pretty amazing you know that? I often times don't like alternate endings and can understand why you hesitated about this one. However, I thought it was brilliantly executed and extremely satisfying. I adore both endings and just love that Bella and Edward had a long and happy life together. I love how you very cleverly worked out that Bella would need to write the journal to have Carlisle send her back. I'm sure it's not easy to write about time and to keep things straight, but you've very creativly done a fabulous job with this. And what can I say about Edward's letter to Bella, just so touching. I, like Bella, was crying by the end of this. Just lovely.
| ss77 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Okay. I totally have tears running down both cheeks. I don't know which ending I love more. Both are so clearly explained and tied up in a neat bow, so that the reader thinks, "Ah. Okay. I could see that happening."
That letter from Edward at the end was it for me. Watery eyes became huge tears. I can't help but wonder what Bella # 2 will feel as she goes back. She will have the knowledge that Bella # 1 didn't, so I guess that will be easier. But, she will be meeting Edward for the first time, and I imagine dealing with his pain-in-the-ass won't seem all that appealing at first. But, like Edward said in his letter, they are meant to be...
That was really great. Thank you!
| grrrr.edward chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
That was FANTASTIC! I'm in love with this plot these characters alll over again. I'm obviously on my way back to reading the original ending, hell I might start the whole thing alll over again! Now that I think of it, I hope it's still up, I can't remember if you took it down or not!
Thank you for this, it was great to see them down this path, and the letter at the end had me in tears. BRAVA!
| MelkiSihou chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I loved it! Its a little sad... But really happy! You are a fantastic writer! I love your work. It isn't just great work. Great work is all around us. Your work is beyond great. It's one of those stories that follow you in the back of your mind. The one you don't even realize you are thinking about until you sit down and really think about it. Your story, both endings... Evoked soo much emotions. It truly is a wonderful masterpiece!
| AnjieNet chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Read this with the charity compilation and thoroughly enjoyed. The whole time travel concept just boggles the mind. This alternate ending was very interesting and very well done, but I have to agree your original ending is the way it was supposed to be! Though I do like the idea of Edward's progeny out there in the world...more of him for the rest of us. LOL
| gabby871 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
omg, i'm a freaking emotional mess after reading this alternate ending. i loved both ways that you ended this story, so thank you for writing this ending also. i don't think you could have gone wrong with either outcome.
| cougellie chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Oh how I've missed this Bella and Edward! Thanks for sharing. I liked this ending too, though I think I prefer the original if I had to choose. Well written of course and a nice lemon too :) I loved the peek into their future together (in what would be our past... so confusing!). Any time you want to write more with these two, I would love to read more! Ellie
| rtexas chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I was just thinking of this story today! Best. Story. Ever!
| soton chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I can hardly see for the tears streaming down my face! I just can't bear the thought of Edward and Bella dead and gone from this life - even though they have lived a full and happy life together!
You capture their deep and passionate love for each other so strongly in your writing - it is always such a pleasure to read your stories. Thank you.
| sherryola chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Very nicely done, but I prefer your original ending. i was kind of confused whyy Carlisle is supposed to destroy the journal though.