Reviews for Beyond Time: Of Diaries and Destiny
MiQuerida 8142 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I don't normally like alternate endings but this one was so good. You put a lot of effort into making this ending seem like it actually could of happened and you challenged me to think of so many different endings that could have been. Great work and awesome job writing both Bellas.
Runs-at-dawn chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Totally awesome, loved it!
Twilighter368 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Wow! The time travel is so mind boggling and I understand why this isn't the main ending. It is still intriguing to see how it would have ending if he wasn't changed. Time travel is so scary to think and write about but you did an amazing job portraying it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
It's so... strange to read about Edward and Bella growing old. And it makes me sad that they'll die, but I guess that's what humans do.
At least they had a happy and fullfilled life.
*wipes away tears*
Great alternative ending!
amberbriana chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Great story
vampiregurl17 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
love it
maphie chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
how, how, how do you know about this kind of love? Tears...Sigh...Tears. Is there more to this story? I'm torn between "Please?" and "I hope not."
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Omg. Loved this ending. But I loved the original more. You have a way with words that leave me wondering every once in a while if their love story could be true. Keep up the good work.
LillyTD chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Love it! But the first is still my favorite.
avidreaderone chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I loved this ending too, even though I prefer the original, this one is also smile-through-your-tears worthy too!

I'll say it again, your are a TRULY gifted writer/storyteller!

I can't find the words to express how your story, with both endings, moved me.

Thanks for the ride on the emotional rollercoaster that was Beyond Time. I loved EVERY word of it!
CULLENS913 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012

I want to tell you what a great plot you came up with for this story.I loved how u described places and reference to to things of the times in the past. So well written,I enjoyed Alice pigging out that was funny.I cried and loved this story its one of my favorites on my job! I recommend to everyone. Thank you for a great book. kep up the writing !

nitsuAPJ chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I was wondering how you'd fix it if she actually had been able to stay behind and have a life with Edward.

Excellent job, m'dear!

ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I truly enjoyed that ending as well, but completely adored the other ending in the true story. Thank you for this though. It was really well done. I especially loved Edward's letter at the ending. Swoon.

mrsamandaclairecullen chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Aww that so lovely. Beyonf Time is one of my favourite stories now, I prefer it to the Twilight original. I can't wait to read More xx
ForeverMrs.Padfoot chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
That sentece "You are mine, Bella, and I am yours…forever." Wow.. :')
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