|Reviews for Dear Diary|
| Danny Barefoot chapter 5 . 12/14/2011
Very nice idea, with Haley's mental state getting worse, and another Puella taking the story up. Some more chapters with Haley gaining a little hope and possibly seeing her friends die would've been good, but can go anywhere from chpt 5.
| Broth3r chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
My opinion is the same. However, that does not mean you should rush to action. Let the story take it's due time. But do not forget it, either.
| ShadowHeartDesigns chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
This is well written, but so far nothing is really happening.
I like the idea of reading an OC character's diary recordings of being a Puella Magi, though, so I'm going to say keep writing, and I will keep reading.