Reviews for Dear Diary
Danny Barefoot chapter 5 . 12/14/2011
Very nice idea, with Haley's mental state getting worse, and another Puella taking the story up. Some more chapters with Haley gaining a little hope and possibly seeing her friends die would've been good, but can go anywhere from chpt 5.
Broth3r chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
My opinion is the same. However, that does not mean you should rush to action. Let the story take it's due time. But do not forget it, either.
ShadowHeartDesigns chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
This is well written, but so far nothing is really happening.

I like the idea of reading an OC character's diary recordings of being a Puella Magi, though, so I'm going to say keep writing, and I will keep reading.