Reviews for It shouldn't have happened
narcissaromanov1918 chapter 21 . 5/22
This is sooooooo hot I must thank you for writing it
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 13 . 4/16
SEVERUS WILL LOVE IT!
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 12 . 4/16
THIS IS AMAZING AND I LOVE IT! DRACO AND HERMIONE R BEST FRIENDS
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 11 . 4/16
THIS IS AMAZING AND I LOVE IT!
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 10 . 4/16
HERMIONE THAT WASN'T VERY SMART
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 9 . 4/16
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT!
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 8 . 4/15
THATS AWESOME AND I LOVE IT!
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 7 . 4/15
HOW DARE U HERMIONE
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 6 . 4/15
YES U TAKE HIS ADVICE
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 5 . 4/15
SEVERUS LEAVE HER BR GOODNESS
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 4 . 4/15
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT!
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 3 . 4/15
HERMIONE HERMIONE U BROKE HS HEART AGAIN
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 2 . 4/15
SEVERUS RIGHT
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 1 . 4/15
OH DEAR
Kat chapter 7 . 4/3
This story is very hard to read.
Snape does not come across as a dark obsessive man, instead he seems like an impotent loudmouth. Hermione just comes across as of obnoxious and whiny.
You have a very interesting idea for story here, I think with a bit of character fine-tuning you could be a truly accomplished writer.
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