jay chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Having Brooke there was such a bad plot point to fix that friendless mess
TheFandomLounge chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Hey, I wanted to leave a review yesterday, but I just did not have the time.

I really enjoyed this story. I always wanted Luke to safe peyton along with brooke also. I hate how the second attack just happened so that breyton could make up. You wrote it very nicely.

I really hope to see another update from you. The lack of leyton is making me depressed( hehe

anyways I just wanted to say you've done a great job, and this is a really good first oth attempt. Looking forward to more!
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
liked it, hope you continue it
CaseyJr chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
I liked that Lucas saved her! This would have been good in the show. Maybe a bit more drama ;0). I wrote about the attack as well. Would love to know what you think!