Reviews for Mortal
A Path That's Clear chapter 1 . 1/6
This was such a sweet story!
Blue Stone Shining Wolf chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
This is a beautiful one shot. Thank you for sharing it.
m0ckingbird77 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Wowowowowowwowow. Great, wonderful, fantastic job... I love how you made him! I mean, it is STILL him...This story was wonderfully written! And the plot was really well thought out.
spikemyangel chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
i love the Doctor and young Rose, so adroable and heartbreaking!
WhoInWhoville chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Wow. This was fantastic! Not much else to say. Loved it...
nerdlovescm chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
this is just beautiful :)

Rose is a little OC (to me at least) but maybe thats just because shes only 5 so thats just a tiny part

but the meaning of it, and aw, you gotta love the 9th doctor :D

your writing style is fantastic and i love the details like the ice creams theyre ordering ;)
Terra Young chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Very good!
Elphie of Heartshaven chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Aww! I liked it, it was cute!