|Reviews for One Million Invisible Lines|
| AncientGleek chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
I'm somewhat speechless, which seems to be my usual state after reading any of your lyrical, lovely, and lust-full stories.
I enjoyed all of it, truly I did! So why is it that the one line that sticks with me is, "Oh, you know those Baptist tent revivals"?
I think this one is a good candidate for moving to AO3!
| 19jacinta88 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Holy sweet mother of all things unholy and passionately horrible...I'm suppossed to go to bed after this... HOT!
| scorpionika chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
No, - thank YOU. Believe me when I say this - I read couple hundred stories when Blaine and Kurt lose virginity to each other, and yours is in the top ten. And the backstory leading to it? Pure genius. I can just imagine guilty Blaine and nervous but sexually frustrated Kurt leading on (just a tiny bit) other men in order to make progress with his boyfriend xD They're cute/sexy like that xP
Once again - thank you for sharing this story with us! xoxoxoxoxo
| 10points4dumbledore chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Hey, you know what? This story is a thing of beauty, and I think you're pretty funny. I laughed out loud (OUT LOUD!) at least 10 times. The entire story is exquisitely crafted. This is not hyperbole. Here are some of my favorite bits:
Potentially a full, flag-flying panoply of extremely, deeply gay things.
...they'd all just been hiding, waiting for him to no longer be single so that they could pour out of the woodwork like there'd been a raid on an oversized birthday cake designed for Elton John.
...he found himself seriously considering whether or not he should pick up a rain slicker while he was at it—or maybe a tarp. At the counter he panicked, because his shopping basket was brimming ... and a nugget of corollary wisdom occurred to him about how you should never shop for groceries when you were starving...
… obviously my extrapolator is broken
I simply grinned through the whole thing. Clever, charming, luscious.
| StayingClassy chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
This is just so...perfect!
It's not the "Blaine's a sex god and Kurt's a blushing virgin and if this were a heterosexual relationship this would be so stereotypical people would vomit" type of first time fic that are too prevalent.
This is honest, intimate, with the right touch of awkwardness and humour. Everything seemed organic and nothing was rushed. PRAISES!
I also loved the post-coital snacking and banter. It just serves to remind us this is Kurt and Blaine, not porn stars number 1 and 2. Kurt lunging forward to grab the popcorn was just so sweet :)
I ADORED Blaine's accidental confession by text and the two messages that followed. ADORABLE.
| Thisaccountisnotusedanymore16 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Absolutely, completely and utterly perfect x
| mental dance party chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
This has to be one of the best fics I've read in a while. The characterization was very spot-on and everything else felt so real to me. Great job on this!
| Thoughts of a Fallen Angel chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Bahahaha. Hot:D The condom buying scene...hahaha.
This was hilarious, and hot, and very, very sweet.:)
Thoughts Of A Fallen Angel:3
| copycat-capycot chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Oh my-Just. Wow. Just wow. Because this is kind of amazing.
So I'll be honest. As I was coasting along this story, I realized that your writing style was brilliant, but I wasn't expecting a blow-your-mind brilliant story. Kurt trying to making Blaine (sort of) jealous and thus get him to touch him? I can't say I've seen this kind of plot before but hey, I figured that this was funny and amusing, no big deal.
Except then came the confrontational conversation between Blaine and Kurt about said flirting. And wow. Blaine's response/reaction and the words he used, and the way he used them-just whoa. Your dialogue, it blows my mind.
My favorite part is Kurt's whole "We can't both be virgins" dialogue thing, mostly because of Blaine's reactions. Because his reactions are kind of awesome and hesitant and I snickered for a good minute after reading that. Virgin thresholds. Pfft.
And I applaud you for your (kind of) sex scenes. Because I can't write sex scenes. And you manage to make these sex scenes interesting to read without the typical and dry "They did things with each other's things. He moaned. The other he came. The end". Or even the full-out sex part when everything goes perfectly and Kurt's a freaking girl and Blaine is smooth and all-domineering and no. Just no. This is how their initial sexual experiences should be, with all the right kinds of hesitance and getting to know each other's bodies and oh my, somewhat awkward moments but thank goodness they were only moments because it's so good to be comfortable around another person in your own skin.
Well, I just rambled my way through a botched review, but one last thing: I love this. You are brilliant. Keep writing. And that was more than one last thing, but I'm going to ignore that.
| mossimo1004 chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I just wanted to let you know that this story was amazing and beautiful. It had just the right amount of innocence and sexiness. I truly loved it a lot and wanted to thank you for writing it : )
| thesoundofsunshine chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I'm not sure why I decided to read this at this hour, instead of bookmarking it for tomorrow. But, oh God, I'm so glad that I read it. It was entirely worth the drooping eyelids. I can hardly believe that the popcorn incident in the beginning is part of the same story as the hotel room sexy times. It was equally smutty and humorous. I adore your writing style. And, now it's time for bed!
| Onee-san chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
"apparently, he was a bit of a nympho underneath all the nervousness. Or despite the nervousness. Or in addition to the nervousness. He was a nervous nympho. Lucky him."
Once I got to that line this story was officially awesome. You're fabulous. It was great.
| padfoot's prose chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Okay, so I added this to my alerts/favourites a while ago, but I keep comign back and reading it again, so I thought I really should review:
This awesome. Spectacular. I'm not a huge M-rated fics reader, but I find that all the K/K stuff reads as if it's written by 4 year-olds, and you can't just search for T, so I tend to get stuck reading M, which means I stumble across a lot of PWP. But thank God, this was NOT that - it is the absolutely perfect balance of plot and adorableness and Klainebows, so thank you so muhc for posting it!
Well done, and please keep writing Klaine fics, because I promise I'll keep reading them!
| DualWielding chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Fantastic, absolutely wonderful story. So much beautiful and romantic detail. I loved it.
| Sarah-And-A-Rocketship chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
G...! That was about the hottest thing I've ever read!
You HAVE to write more, so I'm following this just in case! And you couldn't have written three more paragraphs before you ended it? xD
Loved it! Looking foreword to more if (and possibly when) there is!