Reviews for Fathers at Twilight
tiffaney.103 chapter 4 . 8/7
This is so good. I am Usaly not into "characters reading the books" storys but i came across this jem by accident and fell in love. I love the side comments, especialy how the elders are starting to notice how much like a true family the cullens are. I know you havnt updated in years but i hope you come back to it one day, would love to read more.
WiccaHPTwilightLover chapter 4 . 3/1
SodiumLamp0nAHill chapter 4 . 1/31
Please update! You're doing really well so far, and I can hardly wait to read everyone's reactions to the big reveal!
WiccaHPTwilightLover chapter 4 . 11/27/2016
Guest chapter 4 . 11/5/2016
Please finish this series.
ded chapter 3 . 11/5/2016
I like how you are doing this.

Legible writing: I had a teacher in school that if she couldn't read your writing, it was an automatic F. Amazing how much peoples writing improved during her class.
dreamsandfaiths chapter 4 . 6/2/2016
please continue this story! please its very good and funny...
Hristonostore Onnediel chapter 4 . 2/8/2016
please update this
rrochelle465 chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
Wow what a story so far...,bella is still not use to forks, but the Cullens is doing a great job of making forks interesting...
rrochelle465 chapter 3 . 1/1/2016
Wow some one was almost busted...
rrochelle465 chapter 2 . 1/1/2016
Wow bella is perfect for Edward to bad he wants to take her blood...
rrochelle465 chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
Wow these men are confused especially Charlie the one thing they all have in in common is their love for bella swan and Ness. Cullen what a. Story so far I hope Charlie will be ok and the other men can and will fill in the blanks for poor Charlie...
qhrciskrpc chapter 4 . 11/28/2015
So. You lack motivation.

I am seding my Jane to help you with this.

MayeGirl chapter 4 . 11/2/2015
Update please
Xx-Vampyre-Ninja-xX chapter 4 . 3/26/2015
Please update soon
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