Reviews for Calm, Meet Storm
mrs peeta mellark 2.0 chapter 4 . 9/16/2013
My gosh I love this I would Have loved this Episode to be in Elis Pov
ANAHI'Simagnation chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
I gotta say you are a pretty good writer for Eli's point of view
BelieveTheTrue chapter 4 . 12/3/2011
Rereading all my favorited fanfictions. Awesome writing!
Scarlet DePrare chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
I'm pretty sure Eli was thinking the exact same things. It's like your actually him! Great writing I love how long and detailed they are :) Can't wait for more of your writing!
GoldsworthyEdwards24 chapter 4 . 8/22/2011
That seriously creepy! As it should be! You did an awesome job writing! And if this is crazy - I can't wait to read Drop the World!
takethecurve chapter 4 . 8/21/2011
Wow. The second half of this was absolutely stunning. When I saw that episode, I saw something change in Eli when he walked in and saw Fitz standing there, and I think you captured that perfectly.
shutupgreenberg chapter 4 . 8/21/2011
Your Eli is so fantastic and in character! Great job.
sushi.23 chapter 4 . 8/21/2011
LOVE IT!
shoshychambers chapter 4 . 8/21/2011
I cried when clare and eli were in morty and eli was making her promise, i loved it3
Team Gale chapter 3 . 8/8/2011
That was brilliant.
xXxblackXrosezxXx chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
your chapters are always so long! i love it! :)
GoldsworthyEdwards24 chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
Thank u for updating! I was so scared you wouldn't write more so yea! Loved this chapter so so much 3
LillyMorgan chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
I love this beyond...

I don't even know.

I'm too excited for the last part, oh my god, I really need the last part I can't wait to read it! :D
xXxblackXrosezxXx chapter 2 . 7/21/2011
great story! :)
Xlovestory33X chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Hey girl! I'm soooo sorry I was late on this review! My computer got a virus and I just got it back. Something I absolutely love about your writing is how you don't rush it. You drag the story out enough to give detail, but still be engaging. That's definitely a difficult task, but you have become pretty amazing at it. And I love how you are subtly making Eli more possessive with the amount of time he wants to be with Clare and wants to know where she is. It's a smart choice. This first chapter is a prime example of how much of an expert you are on pace. Pace of story, pace of character. You got this! I have yet to read chapter two, and I might not be able to get to it today, but regardless I'm super excited for it! Congrats! I'm loving this so far!

And thank you SOOOOOOOO much for the "thank you" at the end. I love that I can help motivate you to keep on writing your Eli POV's. You're so pro at them! :) Love ya!
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