Reviews for Road Trip
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
I love this story. It's nice to see a sort of natural teenage reaction to Edward's control. It's nice to see Bella go out and seek independence like this. I reread this story all the time. It's fantastic.
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
stumbled across this on showerstoflowers and had to find who wrote it!

Now, here's the review I started over there ...

Wow, I really liked this.

Liked how you characterized Jasper. Liked Bella's frustration with Edward, and Bella and Jasper taking off.

Really liked when they dumped all the stuff Alice packed for them and bought their own clothes.

Laughed when Jasper mentioned he crushed Bella's phone.

Really liked how you put this together.

Even liked how Jasper felt no guilt for giving Bella her "release."

Just really liked this story. Thanks for writing it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
A sweet story (and a great start to a multi). Lord, I despise Alice.
sarah0406 chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
What the fuck is Edward thinking he can allow or not allow her to do something! She can do whatever she wants to do and he can just shut up and get over himself. Just who does he think he is? And Bella, how can she bear his controlling attitude? At last in this story she gets what she wants...
cherryflowerblossoms chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
You should make this into a full on story. Loved it!
Dpichette chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Love it! Hope you decide to continue!
Rose-la Cullen chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
i hate that this story is only a chapter! I wanted moore of that hot jasper-ness XD
mabarberella chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Lovely little ditty. even lovelier with a Calvin Klein underwear model named Jasper. Yum!
deltagrl chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
InaV chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I loved it. Don't see reason to continue - it is whole and comlete the way it is. But a story with similar line of the plot, and maybe more - that is something I would love to read ;)
rubell chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
almost wish i had a jasper of my own...
EJ 12212012 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I wanna run away with Jasper! God damn. I'm jealous of a fictional character again. Jesus help me...

I'm up for readin' more if you ever wanna continue this little fun ride. ;)
BriyerRose chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Loved it and I hope that you do think about continuing this sometime in the future because I could defintly see at least a couple more chapters! Great job and congrats on the win!

T1nk3rB1tch chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
sux to be edward now don't it...i wonder if you would think of continuing this story and makin it multi-chapter...? please post soon.
mssmith chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Very well done. I loved how you portrayed Jasper and his roots. Thanks and I would love to read more, but it's not necessary.
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