Reviews for Dark Pursuit
Guest chapter 24 . 2/15/2012
Brandon in this story is really sweet! But In the real Morganville vampires story he is a bit of an asshole! U should've made this and M and had some lemons in it. Because that would have been brilliant!
Davinaakafox chapter 52 . 10/9/2011
I really loved the ending! You should come up with a second part of it.. where Abby becomes a vampire & how she copes with it & her children :)
XxkatylouXx chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
great chapter :)
XxkatylouXx chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
great start :)
I love my dogs chapter 52 . 10/9/2011
great chapter :D x
Katylou86 chapter 52 . 10/9/2011
once again a great chapter,x
I love my dogs chapter 51 . 10/9/2011
great chapter ,I can't wait to see what you are going to come up with next :D x
XmidnightXeclipseX chapter 51 . 10/8/2011
ohhhh six months pregnant! can't wait :) x
XxkatylouXx chapter 51 . 10/7/2011
great chapter ,once again :)
DaniellaR chapter 50 . 10/5/2011
6 months pregnant into epilogue plz thanx xxx DR-UK
TheShadowRises chapter 50 . 10/5/2011
This is a really good chapter and i think it's sweet how she says shes going to name the baby after her brothers :) x
XxkatylouXx chapter 50 . 10/5/2011
Love this chapter,i think that you should do the second option ,i really have enjoyed this story ,maybe a girl and a boy for the genders and well done on reaching 50 chapters that is huge story keeps me on my toes ,it is always full of twists and turns and i am never board reading update soon :D xx
I love my dogs chapter 49 . 10/3/2011
great chapter ,please update soon x
Davinaakafox chapter 49 . 10/2/2011
You are a very good writer. You should watch out for past, present tense on your verbs though. You made this story very suspenseful! Thanks! :)
XxkatylouXx chapter 49 . 10/2/2011
loving the chapter i really can not wait for the family reunion,ah poor abby though,please update soon x
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