Reviews for Shadow Child
PenguinGirl94 chapter 3 . 3/22
Wonderful story. You said in the first chapter that you only planed for 2-3 chapters. So if this is the end I think you've tied everything up quite nicely. It shows that Hadrian is beginning to trust Voldemort. And that while the road might be long and bumpy there is an end in sight. I also like how you've left some options open for if you ever decided to expand the story/continue in a new plot bunny using this story as a prologue of sorts. I like the relationship with Draco you've build showing it through deliberately placed flashbacks. And I like the slow grow relationship between Hadrian and Voldemort. I also appreciate the interesting idea of him having all those Slytherins wrapped around his fingers and hardly even realizing it. Like with the protection in the hallways at Hogwarts or the males of the house after his blush. Well done. The terminology in some places was a little wordy and could have been clearer with use of fewer words that still encompass the same meaning. However, I typically just read over the mistakes or odd word choices replacing them in my head as I went.
Sora chapter 3 . 3/17
This story was amazingly well-written, despite it being only 3 chapters. You may be unable to update the story due to personal reasons, so I will not prompt you to 'hurry up and finish the story'. Hence, I would only like to say thank you for writing this story, as it was a good story.
locurarizada chapter 3 . 2/11

With love,
Euri Canzonieri
Enishi-Haru chapter 3 . 2/8
Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't abandon
anonymous chapter 3 . 1/23
Amazing! I LOVED it! :P
greyandginger chapter 3 . 12/13/2016
so beautiful! please continue this;)
rmiser1994 chapter 3 . 10/3/2016
fantastic story so far! .
1414artemis14 chapter 3 . 9/29/2016
This is a beautiful fanfic and I know that you abandoned it but if you can please finish it
Millie chapter 3 . 7/21/2016
Would love to see you return and complete this. It is beautifully written, well composed and in excellent English. I always believed Harry should have been traumatized by his upbringing. JKR may not describe physical abuse, but locking a child, no matter what age in a cupboard is abuse, no matter she didn't use the word. Even with Dumbles "rescue" , trust isn't given that easily. Even his acceptance of Ron isn't believable. You have manage to portray someone who is frightened of reaching out, and won't do so easily. It takes a lot of time and effort to build a trust with someone so damaged. Draco did it right. Please continue, it begs a finish. Thank you
NoSugarForValdez chapter 3 . 7/14/2016
what song is this? I love it. (not just the song. the whole thing.)

Also, I nearly cried.

Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2016
Please return and finish this. It is beautiful. Not only in context but in writing. I don't think I've ever called a story on ffnet beautiful The song quoted is totally unfamiliar but very apropos. It will be exceedingly interested to see how the wizarding world reacts to a new Lord Black after having known him as Harry Potter. Will you follow up on the adult Potters actions? Hopefully that writers block will fade and you will find time to write again. You are quite talented. Thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
Oh no you don't. He belongs to Draco. You better stay away from him if you know what's good for you!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
UPDATE i am inlove please update
darkelfgoddessshilen chapter 3 . 1/19/2016
Awesome I really love this I hope you update soon ; )
TALKNERY2me chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
Please continue
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