|Reviews for Eye of the Storm: Wild Card|
| The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 1/12
I thought Traxis was too busy being raped by Blaze, that Edward-like rapist who can't stop fantasizing over him. What's this, now?
| zipitnow chapter 17 . 11/7/2013
Love the Gree/Luminara moment, just right! I hope she can loosen up a bit more later, come on girl friend...just kiss the boy!
| Eregnar chapter 19 . 9/26/2013
Crest making gagging sounds made my day. Oh Crest, why are you so awesomely hilarious?
And Mace... didn't expect him to test Stone quite like THAT. And complimenting Stone's hair... lol.
"The task hasn't been assigned yet, but I'll let you know who to harass." Oh Obi... you know her so well.
And looks like Stone will be getting a saber :)
| Eregnar chapter 18 . 9/26/2013
"The annoyance in his tone was mundane enough to make her smile," I can relate. Obi-Wan's so cute when he's annoyed. He only seems to get annoyed with people he genuinely cares about, with everyone else it's a mask of politeness, so when he's annoyed, we know it's because he cares.
I'm with Obi on the clone army thing. Kali's forgetting that if they had refused to use the clone soldiers, the Senate probably would have overruled them anyway, and even if they didn't, the Kaminoans would have either sold them to someone else or reconditioned the lot. The Jedi probably ought to have been fighting harder for the clones rights, but refusing the army altogether wouldn't have helped the clones at all.
Also, it's nice to see Mace showing some affection for Kali. :)
| Eregnar chapter 16 . 8/29/2013
Yes I remember the cadets! How could I forget them! I'm glad Tackle didn't die after all. :) At least... not yet. But usually getting them into bacta means they'll be OK, so I'm hoping with a scene from him still.
| Eregnar chapter 15 . 8/29/2013
That was Tackle who died, wasn't it? I was hoping he would survive long enough to realize the Jedi had come to the rescue.
| Eregnar chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
Oh... no. Things aren't looking good for Stonewall. Parts of this got a little sappy for my taste :P but oh well... this is a romance, after all.
Poor, poor Chip. Didn't want the shiny to die :(
| Eregnar chapter 10 . 8/28/2013
No Creon! Don't turn Stone into Weapon X!
| Eregnar chapter 5 . 8/26/2013
I was going to leave this chapter for tomorrow, but when I saw that Kali was playing with a little clone, I had to read just one more. So lovely :) Someone seriously needs to adopt all of the clones and spoil them rotten...
"The Kaminoans hate the ocean. They do everything they can to shut it out, to keep themselves separate from it, but it does what it wants regardless of their efforts." This seems really poignant to me. It captures the essence of Kaminoan culture: striving for perfection and predictability, but never able to quite reach it, because that's not how the universe works. It also strikes me as something for the clones to strive for: to refuse to be crushed down by the Kaminoans... to stay just a little subversive.
I also realized that I have yet to comment on Luminara and Gree. They're a nice contrast to Kali and Stone. There friendship is formal, detached, and they both refuse to acknowledge it, but it is still so clearly there.
Also, is Creon named after the Creon from the Iliad?
| Eregnar chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
Aww... I was hoping for 99. But I suppose this late in the game he's probably dead already :( Trig's cute though :)
And Milo and Crest were so bad! Couldn't stop chuckling. Naughty boys picking on the poor shinies :)
| Eregnar chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
Oh dear... Luminara is on to you, Kali!
It's really fun coming across species I don't recognize in fics and looking them up... do you troll wookieepedia looking for species to have cameos, or are you just awesome enough that you know a lot of them from the eu? Oh, and that's troll in the metaphorical fishing sense, not the typical internet usage :)
| Eregnar chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
Yikes. I see what you mean about this one not being as happy as your others. Any time kids are in trouble, it's not fun. Looking forward to maybe seeing some of the cadets, I hope? I love them so much. They're so adorable. It's also nice to get some insight into Weave. It's been a while since I read your previous ones, but I don't recall him getting as much character development as some of the others, so this will be fun.
Another note: I probably won't be devouring this as fast as the last time. I kinda went on an archive binge... but I'm trying to be a bit more self-controlled with my fanfiction use for now.
| Eregnar chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Well, I'm giving this trilogy a try now! Wish me luck and reasonably dry eyes! (As I've mentioned, order 66 tends to push buttons I don't like having pushed...)
The Kaminoans are an interesting species. Their crazy eugenics stuff flies in the face of all the American and Quaker values I have, and it really makes me think about what I believe. It's hard to understand how anyone could feel that way, but I think it's a good exercise, trying to understand someone so very different from myself. You capture them very well, I think.
And I've decided I love Crest calling Kalinda "boss." It's really cute, for some reason. A somewhat flippant pet-name. It fits him.
| Arrowhead1996 chapter 21 . 1/4/2013
Poor Weave! I nearly started crying when I found out what that dik'ut did to him.
| LanceCorporalBickers chapter 17 . 11/16/2012
I love your story so far but a couple of things i want to add so you might take into consideration, and some things you may want to change! and just to let you know i am not critisizing you or your story :)
1. Assajj Ventress is not a human she is a Dathomirian
2. I am dying for a good story for Gree/Luminara one that would explain the kind of spark they have for one another in this chapter in the story, and i think it would give the story more effect if they had a love/sex scene in it.
Not like one of those crappy porn stories, but more or less the way two people feel when they are madly in love with one another!
3. The way you write makes me very happy, considering the fact that your story is one of the most realistic stories i have read or seen on this site!
So keep up the good work laloga!