|Reviews for Haunted|
| Brinohms chapter 12 . 1/8/2014
JUST BECAUSE NO ONE YOU KNOW DOES IT DOES NOT MAKE IT ACCEPTABLE. Again, you took the ACT. How do you expect to get through college with disrespect for the language like that? Use it correctly and some day it will sound right. You will not make it through freshman English with an attitude like that. I teach it and I know.
| Brinohms chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
"Clothes", not "close". And you took the ACT?
| Gracfully chapter 14 . 12/14/2013
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/21/2013
Wonderful story. Loved it. very good.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
WHO DID THIS TO TIM?!THEM AND DEVON BETTER WATCH IT! THOSE SON OF FEMALE DOGS!
| Tiva-McAbby4Life chapter 20 . 7/31/2012
Great story! I loved the detail you put into it and the end was amazing! Very nicely done :)
| Cuptate Mango chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
love this story
| Reidlover72 chapter 20 . 3/11/2012
Another great story :D
| camry72 chapter 17 . 2/24/2012
Did he escape?
| camry72 chapter 16 . 2/24/2012
| camry72 chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
| camry72 chapter 8 . 2/24/2012
This guy is evil
| camry72 chapter 7 . 2/24/2012
Damn that person who took McGee
| Fire Princen Zuko chapter 20 . 2/14/2012
I read this in one night, and have a lot to say.
OMG, pure awesomeness, even with the superangst.
Loved the portrayal of the relationships between characters. (I was soooooo with Ziva when she was thinking about how to torture David.)
Poor McGee! It's like kicking a puppy!
All in all, a great story that made me cry, smile, and occasionally laugh. You're an awesome writer!
| gotyour6 chapter 16 . 1/30/2012
Dang! You even wrote the parents arrival piece to get around the same ol same ol. You ARE good!