Reviews for The Consequences Of The Choices We Make
jessica158363 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I loved this story! I wish there was more. This would be an awesome story to continue.
BeeBuuzzz chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Yet another beautiful story! I got tears when I read some of the parts, and smiled of others :) I really like how it ended.

When I first read that Jacob was the prince, I though 'uh no'..

But all in all I love this story! :D
Crazybee3 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
This was fabulous! I loved it :)

I'm sad I finished reading it and I am currently pouting about it.

Thanks a bunch!
bronzed topaz chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I cried nearly the whole time through this story. It was a nice change, how Edward wasn't the prince, but it did make me very anxious...what would happen? Who would she choose? Of course I knew she would end up with Edward but I didn't know how long it would take her to figure it out.

I really loved this story. Wonderful job.
heartbrokentears chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
I loved your story the emotions in it are palpable you do a very job with detail I felt as if I were in the medow along side Bella and Edward could you perhaps do this in Edward's point of view
Twiggalina chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Great oneshot!

I really enjoyed reading it:)
DiNishaRob chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I just wanted to say this story was amazing. I can see why it won first place. Congratulations.
gooshoes chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Beautiful story. Loved it!
Robsten love4ever chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
as always what a lovely story you are the best i am so in love with your story's you give so much in to the story that what make it so good and fun to reed what a good job u did thanks you for another cool story :)

JayNahNah chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Beautifully done. I can see why you won! Thank you for not making it predictable that Edward was really the prince, etc...
reesessweetie chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
at first, i thought edward was the prince but he was just trying to hide his identity...

i'm glad bella finally made the right choice in teh end. yay!
intrinsicness chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
The beginning of this story reminded me so much of The Goose Girl.
Byrd3-13 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
amazing as are all your other stories
TwiAggie94 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Sweet- and sorrow. Wonderful story.
astonmartin823 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
You nailed it girl. It totally deserved 1st place.

Be proud!.. It has just the right balance of everything a story needs. It flows, it's romantic, and the drama...oh my god..You had me thinking she had to give up Edward...Wow! just Wow! -Jen
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