fanfictionalcolic chapter 24 . 6/1/2016
I would have toned the drama and the psych down a bit. But explore more about the vampire chasing up and courting the girls. It could have open a whole avenue
Fortheloveoftwilight chapter 17 . 6/29/2014
I don't get bella and sasha. Why don't they care about their own safety? They won't accept help or protection so what is their problem? And how can they end up with the boys if there isn't any kind of interaction between them. No romance nothing. They haven't even talked to eachother. So edward and alex want them but the Girls seem to feel nothing for them. I am so confused about the lack of emotions they have concidering the title of the story. Otherwise good.
yvonne72 chapter 24 . 4/25/2012
Awesome awesome. I love all the mystery u put in your stories and ofcourse. I love me some strong Bella and the wanting Edward. But I like the idea of her not making him suffer to much in this story. He just had to find away to get with her and protect her from that stupid Beast of a man. And always. The family comes three to protect the Love Edward and Bella have
dowlingnana chapter 24 . 12/31/2011
yeah...they got married and spoiled, lol.
dowlingnana chapter 23 . 12/31/2011
OMG...Renee? I love it!
dowlingnana chapter 22 . 12/31/2011
ha ha, boy Edward and Alex had no problem stating their opinions did they, lol. Now the Cullen's should be able to smell that scum bag sitting out there?
dowlingnana chapter 21 . 12/31/2011
Awww the guys are happy now! Stalker shouldn't have went back to Port Angeles...oh darn. lol
dowlingnana chapter 20 . 12/31/2011
No he won't succeed another time I don't believe. Glad Edward and Alex got to be around the girls more, ;o)
dowlingnana chapter 19 . 12/31/2011
YES,he was confirmed and I'd be surprised if Alex and Edward allow the police to handle the stalker, ha ha ha.
dowlingnana chapter 18 . 12/31/2011
Good, a picture now!
dowlingnana chapter 17 . 12/31/2011
Alex had a good idea to be able to stay with the girls for Edward and himself.
dowlingnana chapter 16 . 12/31/2011
Good job Sasha, I would've done the same, but, too bad the stalker wasn't permanently injured in that crash or dead.
dowlingnana chapter 15 . 12/31/2011
Hopefully Bella will be okay. I'm surprise Edward isn't freaking out.
dowlingnana chapter 14 . 12/31/2011
Finally, they're going to do the album. Nice touch with La Bella roses!
dowlingnana chapter 13 . 12/31/2011
I hope Esme's plan works coz' these girls aren't being very helpful in anything yet. Frustrating!
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