Reviews for Slave Boy
7019289 chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
you should try and turn those poems into a song
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
I think you broke him... He's just been looking at the screen for half an hour now...
Darkestshadow Brightestlight chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Those poems are amazing, you have some real talent.
Leo'sChamber chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
i liked it! the idea was really cute and all but you need to work on the grammar a bit, i didn't drive me insane but it slightly disturbed me.. a lot..

but like i said, it was adorable!
Q chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Awesome poems!
Karasu Kagami chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 Harry a merman or a male harpy? Now im confused... Second chap please?
H Bregalad chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
I liked story ok. The Poems are great, I was disappointed to get to your note at the bottom and understand that they are not yet songs that I can buy somewhere.
Eccentrically Peculiar chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I really love this fan fiction! I read it yesterday, but came back today to re-read it and because I felt bad for not leaving a review when I first read this yesterday. Something about the plot is so unusual and unique that it captures the reader’s attention! I like that this pairing is so different; it is the polar opposite of a cliché. It is the kind of story that is hard to get off of your mind after being read. My only constructive criticism would be that there are a few grammar errors throughout, and they throw off the flow of the story at times and make the writing less coherent. Still, I was able to understand what you meant, so the reading experience was not hindered too much. :D
Mickey chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Very sweet
Amermaid'sbigtoe chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Love it...:...:...;...
domsijohn chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
love it
DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Love the story, Hope you'll update the story... ASAP!
JWOHPfan chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
917brat chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
awww so sweet.