|Reviews for Vacation|
| ParasiTeGuesT chapter 6 . 4/23/2014
Did Riza just kiss two guys in one hour?
| AnonymousFace chapter 6 . 7/28/2012
It's and interesting idea, but as far as the characterization goes everyone is very out of character. Some of the back story would explain her ability to speak to Mustang as she does. But I don't think she would be one to let her sense of duty drop when on vacation with her superior officer. But still the storyline is intriguing. I would be interested to see more of this story, just to see where it's going.
| OwlCookies XD chapter 4 . 8/3/2011
-.- sigh... at least theres royai
| OwlCookies XD chapter 3 . 8/3/2011
WTF FUERYXHAWKEYE? O_O im scared now...
| OwlCookies XD chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Very ooc, but its ok cuz fuerys hilarious xD
And wen riza stepped out of the car, I imagined her to be brittany speares I dunno y...
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 6 . 7/18/2011
Can't wait for next chapter
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 5 . 6/30/2011
| Starship Artisan chapter 4 . 6/27/2011
Ooooh scandalous XD this is entertaining to say the least, good work
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 3 . 6/16/2011
Woahaoah RIZA KISSING KAINE!
Now THAT is unheard of! Can't wait till the next chapter!
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
aww poor riza :(
| Mister Caffe chapter 3 . 6/16/2011
Haha, you have no idea how happy I was at the ending.
Its small, but Kain x Riza has been kind of my (not so) hidden pairing I liked.
Wonderful so far though :) Looking forward to the next.
| Elite-chan chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Hm, Interesting. MORE! :))
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Adorable! Can't wait to read more!