Reviews for Battered and Bewildered
Pat chapter 1 . 8/1
It's been a while since you've worked on this story, so I suppose you're not planning on getting back to it - which is too bad. Any continuation you might eventually get to, I suppose will include your femmeslash - the unfolding of an intimate relationship between Hermione and Minerva. (Possibly this would include some backstory on any relationships Minerva has had in the past.) It could also include how the other professors, and/or the students, view this relationship.

But THE MOST IMPORTANT part of your story is actually not those. It is this: *In the magical world*, how does an abused wife escape from an abusive husband, particularly one who has the law and personal pull behind him? You covered the physical escape - but how does Hermione prevent Ron (Auror, and War Hero) from doing things like challenging or invalidating the divorce - turning all her friends away from her with lies and intimidation - stalking her - even kidnapping, raping, or killing her? THERE is where your story could really stand out, instead of just being another relationship-between-characters/femmeslash story.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16
Please update
theblackestwhite chapter 4 . 4/20
pleeease update!
Daw-Set chapter 4 . 11/7/2015
Very good
LKlovesAK chapter 4 . 7/13/2015
Keep going please.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/21/2015
No more? Damn.
jadethetroll chapter 4 . 1/4/2015
The way you describe her Situation with Ron really gets to me. It seems so real and yet do i feel relieved when he backed away from Hogwarts once again being the safe hafen it promised to always be. Continue, please!
elizabeth.mary.stark chapter 4 . 12/13/2014
This is so good! You should update soon!
amberee89 chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Would love to read more! Please update this great story soon!
Americ Pet chapter 2 . 12/4/2014
Yes Minerva!
tlc125 chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
Ha ha ha! That was great. It's ashamed that everyone seems so helpless. Maybe it's just something they're not used to dealing with? It's good that the others are becoming aware of the situation now.
Thanks. :-)
tlc125 chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
Not to be rude, but all of this fear could be alleviated if she would press charges against that idiot. Share her memories with the right people and have him sent away. Ron can't have that much pull. No one is above the law.
Even Ginny knows something's wrong now.
Be rid of him and let her learn to move forward. She may have been down, but she still is Hermione. She is logical. Let her use that brain of hers.
I do like your story. Ron may have tricked her, but she's still the smartest witch of the age. ;-)
kmc356 chapter 4 . 11/12/2014
While the "abusive Ron" trope is often painful and unbelievable in fic, your writing here is very compelling. I'm really digging the characterizations and the pacing. Keep up the great work!
whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
it is your story and you can do what you what, but in canon hermoine was more prone to attack then ron, hermoine has attack ron before ron has never attack her, the idea of ron attacking hermoine seem so ooc that it not believable. but good luck with your story.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/11/2014
very nice continue please?
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