Reviews for The Mystery Girl
Mommymac0508 chapter 17 . 8/22/2016
I liked it sad but so sweet thank you
Nyx-The-Kitsune chapter 15 . 6/21/2015
i bet rose
sam chapter 17 . 9/20/2014
wow does charles ever find out about her and esme being vampires at all.
sam chapter 8 . 9/20/2014
well now he saw bella and now he wants her would he want esme too if he sees esme
sam chapter 7 . 9/20/2014
carilsle and esme would help her.
sam chapter 6 . 9/20/2014
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! see i knew it it was charles evanson but was that esme lost son? i am still confused a little bit is that her grandmother..
sam chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
i think i know who c.e. is i just got a feeling that is esme's ex-husband charles evenson
mygooddog chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
how did the vamps feed off of her without turning her?
Helen chapter 2 . 2/13/2014
This is one of my favorite stories by you. I only just now decided to post a review. I love it! I bookmarked your story page. Because of you, I might become an author. I'm writing a book about vampires. I'm 13 btw. :3
vampiregirl31 chapter 17 . 1/26/2014
awww i love how this story ended
wanda uley pack chapter 2 . 10/22/2013
If she didnt talk to thm..hw did esme knw ha nem as bella,wen talkin 2 edward in their thougts
ZoeyRedbirdXStark chapter 17 . 4/30/2013
AMAZING! just WONDERFUL! i read the whole thing from start to finish, and loved the ENTIRE thing.
sparkles99 chapter 17 . 4/13/2013
you HAVE to continue this IT'S SO AWSOME words cannot explain it but it's SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWSOME you HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!
AliceCullen0629 chapter 17 . 2/17/2013
good story, I liked reading it
NeonsLover chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
please update soon 3
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