|Reviews for Missing love|
| WarFlower chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Whoa... that was good
| Seraphina Dragon chapter 5 . 1/14/2013
hope to read more
| shiro-chan chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAA AASSSSSSEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!
| hateme101 chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
I really like this story
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/2/2012
this such a really good story can't wait to read more
| A Call to Arms chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
The source of the purge has been found. A group of regular FF users, Critics United, will post any story they don't like on their forum. Then they have all their members mass report it until the story is deleted. In their forum they say they hope to cause another purge soon.
They are not critics; they are bullies. They do not offer constructive criticism; they flame and poke fun. They like to call stories sh¡tfics, and call authors whose story they got deleted 'immature' and 'likely to b¡tch at them.' They often use heavy sarcasm and condescension in their supposed 'constructive criticism.'
Let us go and mass report them and their stories. The head of Critics United has MA sex scenes in her stories. Copy and Paste. Spread the word.
P.S. While I am not a writer the actions of Critics United still disgust me. You should see the things they say about stories obviously made by fourteen year olds. Instead of offering anything helpful they crush the writer's will to write and improve.
Also, if you want a laugh at Critics United's expense, look them up on encylopedia dramatica. Make sure you type ' ' with 'critics united' following.
| XxXUchiha SurayaXxX chapter 4 . 8/30/2011
Omg I love this story itz xo gr8 plz update I wanna kno what'll happen next.
| LightsBright chapter 4 . 7/3/2011
I love this fic so far! Please update! I love how protective pein is over hinata!
| Anissana chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
Good chapter, hope you update soon!
| Bleu666 chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
PLEASE PUT UP A CHAPTER SOON! if your out of ideas you could always make it a story were Pein wants her but it takes time for her to give up her love for Naruto and her village. Make Pein extremely jealous and protective.
| Bleu666 chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
please update soon
| Anissana chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
Enjoying the story, update soon! Is there gonna be any smut in this story? Since it's rated M.
| Anissana chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Omg wow didn't see that one coming, but good story so far. Hope you update soon! Can't wait to read about Hinata and Pein 3
| in your dreams as well chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Wow that was unexpected