Reviews for Slumber
Farla chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
[TG: you mean the incredibly boring one

TG: i mean seriously her personalitys like flatter than a pancake]

That's a common fan complaint but I really can't think of anyone actually in the Homestuck universe thinking of it like that. Feferi's extremely outgoing and chatty, with a tendency to insult people out of the blue.

...you're calling her CG. That's Karkat, carcinoGeneticist. She's CC. And she wasn't actually raised by a horrorterror, just something that could speak with them.
Farla chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Chat format and the spelling/grammar things caused by the typing quirks are banned on this site. You should consider posting on Archive of our Own, because sooner or later someone's going to go through deleting these.

Anyway...this isn't badly written, but it's repeating almost exactly the events we see in the comic. Repeating Feferi's conversation with Jade but with a sentence describing her white eyes in place of the picture we saw doesn't add anything, and from there you just describe the events of Jade waking up, fighting with an imp and failing to talk with Bec. You're not saying anything new.