|Reviews for Naruto Rend|
| Edgar3t chapter 8 . 3/11
Both stories are awesome, please keep writing. It makes sense for the Shinigami to be a hollow strangely
| Meck Viking chapter 8 . 3/11
not every chapter can be filled with fights. you need to have some chapters like this for proper charater building. and it was a blasted good chapter.
| Elim Garak chapter 8 . 3/11
"Kakashi kept track of the Academy and anything inside village walls" - Kakashi? In charge of the academy? That lazy idiot who completely fucked up the training of the one team he managed to pass in 10 years? After failing who knows how many fine teams with his moronic test, that tested teamwork in people that have never been trained or taught to work as a team? Not to mention that the village basically fails those students instead of reorganizing them into groups of people better suited to working with each-other. I would stick him with a desk job managing something in ANBU - somewhere where nobody would care if he was late or reading porn.
| molyneux chapter 8 . 3/10
naruto does have a point. he just arrived and a day later he is expected to go to war for some people who he doesn't even know. I can see him having Garra's back in a fight but beyond that let them deal with their own problems.
| AverageNOOB chapter 7 . 3/9
I gotta say that while your fight scenes are good, I look forward to your more dialogue-heavy moments. You got a knack for characterization.
| AverageNOOB chapter 4 . 3/9
I really like the dialogue in this one. The part that kills me is Lee giving him that "Yosh Gaara-san. Yosh.".
| Molyneux chapter 7 . 3/1
I'm sorry but I am having a hard time understanding why exactly they are unable to fight hollows. the spiritual aspect of chakra would still damage them. To their eyes I see the hollows as being large spirit based power beings so they should still be able to sense them as well.
| DarknessIsBliss chapter 7 . 3/1
Thank you Kiba! Nobody reacted with that when he actually killed it...
So...this Child of Prophecy's second prophecy must really get these family members hopeful, huh? And then very, very despaired, didn't expect that to be a word..., once they reflect and notice the whole apocalypse, suffering stuff...And then look! Hope of salvation. And back down...resting in the hands of a fairly long dead, body-less jinchuuriki...Wheeee, roller coasters are so fun! aren't they?
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 7 . 3/1
Two espada is plenty more than a great many others could create… hell considering how fucked up the eigth is,and the sevenths TRULY ungodly dangerous ability…. They got some good blood out of them. It was a shame, but still war.
So Naruto has to throw in his hat in the give Ichigo a fucked up amount of teachers and powers department? and considering Nagato is also a "child" does he have to give Orohime his eyes and power?
interesting mess if so. still a tad annoyed how much... your doing a power creep and power seep bit with the ninjas and everyone else but I get that you MUST do that if oyu want the villans to have any hope at all in doing stuff and NOT gathering up every last hollows and creature in hunce mundo there IS which they DONT have control over all groups so theyd be sqrewed for a long, long while.
and uhh... our dear eight espada was ALOT more fucked up than what Ishida was thinking, he just had health packets all around him but so like a serious teenager to only see the VERY last result of the fight and I bet yeah he went to do some studying and some scientist crap for that fight of there's.
and yeah, Garra being hurt by Naruto whos closed ranks and its further sqrewed up by the fact that he hasent given himself time to deal with the frustration that he DIED. ouch. no more dreams or hope he had for his life and all... dam. and to HIM his death and final reconing only happened ... hell less than a DAY ago. dam.
still like uryu and his sense of knocking Ichigo around a bit to shape up.
and heh considering how much of an epic civil war and CHOS that the soul society ark was.. and the fact that kenpachi WON HIS FIGHT DAMM IT (sqrew his sword/resolve being broken Ichigo fell FIRST)
and Ichgo breaking Bakyuas resolve when HE was the one able to walk away after defeating renji before this mess... well that is a bigger victory than just out and right defeating him which HE DID do sort of...
so yeah Ichigo needs some training and epic fine tuneing for some real good fun. hes surrounded by some MIGHTY big planet wise foes that hes surrondined by, it will be nice to watch him train himself up. and yeah I like how Ichigos like I thre my biggest and best and NARUTOS like they wernt fine controlled and all... should be interesting. I wonder if Naruto can teach Ichigo a jutsu trick or two if he wanted to?
I mean Ichigo is REALLY specialized for the specific type of fighting types he does.
huh. well should be interesting.
| sabba5600 chapter 7 . 3/1
i'm not sure why but I am finding myself decidedly uninterested in the events happening to Narutos' world of the living. Maybe I haven't had time to connect with the characters yet or something but I kinda end up skimming through those parts. Other then that I do enjoy the story and I'm wondering when Naruto is going to go get his sword. Yamamoto has it right?
| Malix2 chapter 7 . 3/1
Nice new chapter, keep up the nice work. :)
| Meck Viking chapter 7 . 3/1
wow... deep stuff at the end there.
also lee and karin... yeah i can see it. also i may be wrong but lee useing a certain spear from a certain killing ground? the fires of life... of rebirth? :P still everyone seems to be growing up and matureing some more. will be interesting to see what happens to everyone when they are used to being a soul and how the wound and all that the earl and sir stick up his ass aizen are dealt with. really really looking forward to all that this story does.
| Elim Garak chapter 6 . 2/23
Nice. I hope that Yamamoto gets kicked in the nuts at some point. He has so much power and experience under his belt that he should have prevented the vast majority of the crap that happened in the Bleach series. The fact that he didn't places much of the blame & deaths at his feet. If he is unwilling or unable to exert influence and play politics to achieve something better in the political system of Seireitei, then he should have stepped down and retired. He could have been placed in reserve and called up for heavy combat when it was needed.
| sabba5600 chapter 6 . 2/22
ouch poor Gaara. Woot for timely updates!
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 6 . 2/22
ok I didn't like what you did with Ichigo, but I like your Yamamto, hes sensible ins ome things... even if the hitsugia thing was DIRY and cheep and stuff. and I still don't like it,c ause it doesn't make as MUCH sense, ige tdoing that for a short while for training before a big fight and use em as reserves and shit but...
and Naruto opens his big fat mouth, pissing people off while macking the faulty assumption aht he can just "take" him on and gets in a fight first thing!
and yeah Naruto being sensitive for stuff like that but when he doesn't even KNOW what a hollow is, so any points that Yamamto WOULD have are completely lost on him, and as hes gotten to know Nel first (who is an ODD DUCK) is going to come first rather than what he learns about hollows. so hes not going to quit eGET IT
and YAMAMOTO has ofught and LOST centuries opon centuries in this war and things and... yikes.
and Garras got to adjust with people from his old life and now his new one...
and I really hope that was more Yamamoto restraining himself in regards to ichigo and stuff
still, fun, fun fun! and Aizen and the Earl having osme NASTY surprises from each other, all while they manipulate Orohime, and GIN just ready and waiting for some blood...
should be fun. especially as they manipulate orohime with her ... interesting take on kindness and stuff.