Reviews for Pneuma
Crimson-Kiss17 chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
Can't wait to see where you take this next...
ElizaKate chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
This is really good! Short, Sweet and full of Delena Fluff! Update soon!-Liz
Arckangel chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
I think you did absolutely AMAZING. You did fit Damon's character perfectly and AH i agree with you...i read these things and i could just imagine his perfect, smooth and dark voice speaking and i could picture the amazing way his perfect features look when he is angry. This was very well written and i didnt find anything that needed fixing.

Please update soon. I have a feeling i am going to LOVE this story.

hopelessromantic549 chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
ay i love this! damon is so hot when he's protective :)

"She was hot and uninterested, so I slipped something in her drink." It was taking awhile, but the kid was finally starting to understand that he meant business. He was admitting what he'd done without even needing to be compelled, after all, so honestly, he mustn't be the brightest crayon in the box to st


can't wait for more :)
sarahA09 chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
awesome ! you a great writer !
Breathlesswhisper15 chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
I'm loving this story and its only 2 chapters in! Can't wait for more!
siberia21 chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
This is interesting! I enjoyed. Please update soon. Thank you!
hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
i love that it's not obvious whether she got raped. also:

She seemed to be good at that… worrying him, because she sure managed to do it a lot more than he appreciated. But this time was different. It felt different. Not usually did her phone calls send him into a fit of utter panic like this. Hell, normally they didn't cause panic at all. And it wasn't even what she had said, but more of the way she said it.

damon's concern is lovely!

can't wait for more :)
Kathy chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
i like where this story is going. i'm really curious to find out what happened to Elena and why exactly she called Damon. please update soon!
sarahA09 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
it was nicely written !
delenasanarchy chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
damon to the rescue as always loveit
Annie chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
This was really good! can't wait for the next chapters, please up date soon :)
Breathlesswhisper15 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I love these kinds of stories no matter how many times the plots used! I love that elena called damon! Can't wait for more :)
Justine106 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
this is really good; i'll definitely read more if you continue it
Arckangel chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
*giggles* _ *giggles*

Love itttttt...

Please add more soon. I love Damon...eeks. all of my stories have Damon as a major role. lol

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