|Reviews for Shattered Moon Part 15: The Rift|
| Izabellachichi chapter 14 . 11/12/2012
I'm really found of Byakuya and Renji couple. I read most of your stories about it. I particularaly enjoyed reading the Shattered Moon serie. I must admit that I'm quite frustrated because I can wait to know how this will end, especially after the last chapter of The Rift.
Pretty please, don't let me wait too long.
| Eva Galana chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
You...You...sly writer, you! You already had Renji's mom figured in! I really like the backstory for her and Akemi's meeting and life together - however brief.
| Eva Galana chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
Wonderfully fluffy chapter. I love how, even in the midst of child birth, Bya and Ren can still manage to get into an argument! Too cute...
And twins!? Oh my gosh...they love tormenting themselves, don't they?
| Eva Galana chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
I am enjoying this romantic series quite a lot. It is, as always, well written, full of love and familial promise. I also like that Renji has found his family and reunited with his father. It's like giving everyone what they wanted most. I love the back and forth between Bya and Ren. When Renji's inheritance was revealed, I could have fist pumped that 'good! Now that Kuchiki clan will leave him alone!'.
You write with such honest emotion, and really capture the family moments so well...it's almost like these scenes have been lived, and you had simply recorded them.
My only quip - and it's minor, and nothing at all overly important - is this: Aren't the children rather young to be as powerful as they are? I mean, Rukia and Renji are over 150 years in age, and Rukia has yet to obtain Ban Kai. To have children - barely of human age (for a Shinigami, they are still infants) - achieving so much, so fast...maybe it's because I'm not quite the romantic you are (and I meant that in the nicest ways - I do not write romance), so maybe I'm completely missing why they are so powerful (Renji is closer to the Spirit King by blood than the kids are, so it would have made sense for him to have achieved such power at a young age...). Like I said, not important. My own musings and should not be taken seriously.
But, you know me...I gotta say what's on my mind. If you don't get a review from me for every chapter, just know 'cause I don't wanna just say 'wonderful update', but really have something to say.
Oh, and FYI: I've been checking on your profile. You sure have a lot of stories I need to catch up on! However do you find the time or inspiration?
| koko chapter 14 . 9/29/2012
Oh poor them :-( poor Renji he spent 2 years trying 2 comeback to his family , alive and well, my heart is aching for him, this shows how strong is he even carrying a baby. The scene with bya waking up the surrounded by his family's members was moving ! This story will only get better, I cant wait 4 da next update,Spunky sama please honey dont let ot take u another year 2 update the next chapter, am praying u finish this piece of workz thanks fer da great !
| Firebirdever chapter 14 . 9/9/2012
Wow, I was a bit lost by the time skip but now I think things will move pretty fast. Cant wait lol. But Im asking myself, is the time pass differently in the dimension Renji is ? and is he still pregnant? I think yea but I was a bit confused, but i cant wait for the next update :) Renji and Byakuya will surely be together again. I hope lol
| Yamalover chapter 14 . 9/6/2012
Oh how my heart fluttered reading this; for Renji, for Byakuya, for Takeo (would love to see more of him - his turning out to be quiet the character!) for the spirit king and elder Hajime. Those two are constantly being seperated even though he is the spirit king *sighs* LOVE it cant wait to read more!
| Nemesis chapter 14 . 9/4/2012
I noticed this only now but I felt it was necessery to point it out, uhm I AM THE ONE WHO COMMENTED THE HUNDEREDTH COMMENT WOOOOOW *takes a deep breath* and its in one of my favorite stories! Even though u just posted an update, Grand me this wish and update it fast Spunky. 100 kissses 2 u spunky ;-) lol
| Nemesis chapter 14 . 9/4/2012
Spunky! Are u trying to kill me here? Why did u have to stop there? please please please dear spunky countinue this , u killng me here, seriously, no jockin period. The chapter was very sad yet it was beautiful as usuall, good job,spunky !
| alabirdie chapter 14 . 9/4/2012
bwahhh, I've been waiting for this moment forever! renji's finally gonna get to go home!
I can't believe it's been three years, it's so sad but I'm still happy. it's amazing to see the kids have grown under hajime's guidance. but byakuya has been like sleeping beauty and renji is like the scarecrow :)
I wonder though, is renji still preggo?
please update soon, this is my favorite series other than petals and fangs!
| Nemesis chapter 13 . 8/25/2012
Yet another great story from u spunky. My favourite pairing is Renbya and ur the best when it comes to writting about them, I recently Started reading ur series shattered moon and I belive its the best u have written! keep it up pls Spunky , am rooting 4 u. And for the sake of this series' greatness pls dont forget about it, I hope u continue it , coz we would love to see how u will finish this story with the family reuniting again and also welcoming another member into their beautifull family.
| Tomyallen chapter 13 . 8/6/2012
Oh My...its been so long since you've touched this story...Glad you did though.
Poor Ren and Bya. So much going on. I just hope that Renji can find a way out soon. The kids need both of them.
You need to make this series of stories into a book. So much in it.
| Windgates chapter 13 . 8/5/2012
Great chapter, as always; Although I feel sorry for Byakuya and the kids, they're suffering a lot in this fic (I almost cry with the previous chapter, when Byakuya was crying in Takeo's arms). However, I trust this will end up well for everyone :)
| walkure chapter 13 . 8/5/2012
If I remember correctly, there is something going on, not always good, on byakuya's and renji's anniversary.
I think renji should escape and leave zenbon and chimp behind and then regroup than staying and risking everything.
| Firebirdever chapter 13 . 8/5/2012
Oh Im so happy that you decide to update this one, it has been too long. But I cant wait to know what will happen now, either Renji and Bya are in delicate situation and I hope that everything will be alright. I hope that this damn doorway will open rapidely, and now that Bya is near death, Renji must hurry, hope that they will receive help from Takeo or Chisaki. Ah cant wait cant wait cant wait
I had forgot how much I was craving on this story :)