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TheAwesomeMe128 chapter 4 . 8/13/2014
That's weird that people are trying to correct your writing style
A. Writing style is personal, and distinct for everyone
B. Fanfiction typically is not written in a novel style. There's plenty of fundamental differences
Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Why does everybody coo in this story?
SayMrrp chapter 19 . 5/18/2014
Krolshi chapter 19 . 2/23/2014
This has been by far the god damn sweetest & most eye tearing feels hurting fic I 'be read from you , I swear ! But I really like you you got more in depth with the issue with Mama Vagras & Antonio 'a parents , kind if like . It has really improving , when looking back at the previous fics like 'Welcome To Hell ' which has a similar theme :3 I will the say the ending felt like a cliffhanger , like there should have been more or something . But I still do like where you ended it ;D Great job with this one ! So many feels gushing every where TTTT
And as always thank you so much for writing :D Now I must sleep & hopefully won 't be too tired tomorrow , I actually finished right at my bedtime xD
Krolshi chapter 18 . 2/23/2014
Y-you have no idea how much tears I am shedding for this , or your fics in general ... ! Oh my god Antonio my baby ... Fuck you & your fucking parents ... I am so god damn happy that you have friends like Francis & Gil that were able to make you so happy & fuxking adorable ! (in this fic ) ... I am literally sobbing a my freaking eyes out ... -gives Antonio a big & tight hug - really emotional chapter , like no lie .
Krolshi chapter 17 . 2/23/2014
-gasupu - We , well Lovi , get 's to meet Antonio 's parents ;D Yay
Krolshi chapter 16 . 2/23/2014
Oh my god this so so bittersweet ! I 'm crying laughing ! Why you do this to me !
Awww Marcello ! xD
-let 's out a shaky sigh - Just a few left ... I WILL finish this even if it goes past my bedtime ...
But anyways like it how Antonio randomly pops up ! Yes it 's fluffy AND hilarious xD
Personally I 'm glad that Serafina can spend time with her kids that she upped & left , which then makes me also glad that she 's going to jail ...
Krolshi chapter 15 . 2/23/2014
Wait I thought Vash was with Roderich ?A? In the beginning ? Or was that someone else ?
But no ! This is nice & refreshing dome the whole family issue at the Vagras house :3 hopefully & probably surely Romano is enjoying himself
Krolshi chapter 14 . 2/23/2014
Eeeee ! A double date ! Yes ! Cx
Hmm I have some theories of why Mama Vagras is back but ... Idk .. This is realllllyyy gonn bother me .. e3e
Krolshi chapter 13 . 2/23/2014
Awww that 's so cute ! QwQ I 'm glad that Antonio didn 't just went & had sex with him right there & then . Just tells you he has morals & is ... Such a freaking guy & respects Lovi & & & and god this is so sweet ... So so sweet ;U; good job
Krolshi chapter 12 . 2/23/2014
-sobs - this is so sweet , holy crap hit me right in the feels , no really I am crying TT _ TT
And Antonio ... You sweet tomato lover you , god that last part tho it was perfect ! Those ref aren 't bad either ;3
Krolshi chapter 11 . 2/23/2014
;A; ... Wow , this has left me speechless .. xD
Krolshi chapter 10 . 2/22/2014
Gahhhh ! Lovi is jealous ! This chapter is so sweet The bonding ! The progression ! Ugh , you have me smirking , giggling , and fangirling ! This is just too cute !
... Wait by style you mean the dialogue wise ? Where it breaks off for every dialect soken by a differ person ? :o
Krolshi chapter 9 . 2/22/2014
Hahaaaa , he finally learns of it ! XD I wonder if Gil will find Birdies ' as well ;D Sweet fic ? Nia is so adorable by the way Cx
Krolshi chapter 8 . 2/22/2014
... Pffttttt ... HahahaaaaHAHAAA ! Omfg why .. Dude ! This is hilarious ! Like no lie ! Holy shit ! XD I can 't ... Breath ... !
Poor Antonio & his penis , LOL . And Lovi .. He just pulled down Toni 's pants like it 's normal .. Man wait until Francis heard about this , if he does that is ;D Tho I highly doubt it
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