Reviews for Inside Man
JB30 chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
I love how they are getting more comfortable with each other through their letters. I hope Edward can find a job when he gets out. Loving the letters ooza!
liz3615 chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
Love his first and last lines. That line in her letter freaked me out, too. lol Good thing he has a sense of humor. I'm liking the way that their friendship is forming.
jansails chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
Going on the premise Edward is being honest with Bella because he really wants to have someone honest & real to communicate with & knows he must follow suit to experience the best of it:

Gawd, how can you not fall in love with his self deprecating sense of humour: "What's the catch? I'm in prison."

Edward's appreciative of every morsel of info about Bella's life he receives.

Edward feels hope because Bella's being herself, genuine, yet light, cheerful with him.

nightline chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
Bella's last letter almost gave ME a heart attack, so I can't even begin to imagine Edward's reaction. Although I have a suspicion that he wasn't totally kidding about the uncontrollable sobs...

Somehow I think Edward is a good person, and always has been to some extent, who made bad decisions or got bad advice from bad friends to end up where he is today. I don't think the "eye opener" was necessary, at least not very much.
denverpopcorn chapter 10 . 6/9/2011
I adore her worldview:

"Yes, you have to live with it, but that doesn't mean it has to define you, either. Not everyone is going to write you off because of your past. Have some faith in yourself. I'm not optimistic because I'm young and naïve. I'm optimistic because it makes me feel better. Maybe if you weren't so down on yourself, the future wouldn't seem so daunting. I'm not in your position, but don't you think if you thought about what your life could be like that it would lift your spirits and help you feel more prepared? Not all spirals have to be downward."

You're creating some real characters I want to root for. Thanks for that!


Siobhan B. Masen- Fraser chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
OMG, he is breaking my heart! Seriously, I can't tell you what I feel when I read his letters. I can't wait for him to get out and hopefully there will be some face to face time for them. Some getting to know each other better. God listen to me I sound like a Lemonhoor! Oh who am I kidding, I am a Lemonhoor! Keeping my fingers crossed for there to be a lemon here.

Till next time...

shellwrx chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Very cool premise. I saw you tweet yesterday about this story. Excited to read about some Prisonward.
ReDish chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
Fun back and forth. Keep the letters coming!
xxxbulletxxx chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
I like funfetti too! Chocolate is way over rated. When he gets out and goes to his parole officer don't they help him with locating places that will hire cons?
jansails chapter 10 . 6/9/2011
Bella does a marvelous job of being a cheerleader to Edward's pessimistic views brought about by his choices & consequences.

Charmie77 chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
i absolutely freaking ADORE this story! off to tweet about it.
deranged-dreamer chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
I wish he wasnt that much older than bella. And instead of 11 years in prison maybe 5?

Its just that the age difference and the amount of time he spent in jail will make it much harder for a hea.
loopylou992 chapter 10 . 6/9/2011
OOOH I so so hooked on this story! Hope that they do manage to keep writing and eventually meet up once he is free.
Burntcore chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
Wow, he is certainly starting to care about her a lot. I hope it doesn't scare her.
ChocolateLover82 chapter 11 . 6/9/2011
"Not when you're all I have." Eep! this killed me.
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