|Reviews for Inside Man|
| MilaSweetLips chapter 13 . 6/13/2011
Edward wrote her a song? Too sweet. These two are killing me with their discreetness!
| kymbersmith90 chapter 13 . 6/13/2011
Ok your Edward seems incredibly sweet. We know why Edward was arrested but I'm wondering about the circumstances surrounding it. He must have made some pretty big mistakes. I hope he is a sweet as his letters sound and not just putting on an act.
I love that Bella sent him a postcard from Florida. It shows that she truly does think of him often. Edward confessed to the same feelings so I wonder how many times a day he reads and terrace her letters?
I thought it was incredibly sweet that he sent her some sheet music he had composed former birthday. He doesnt even know her and he has sent her one of his only possessions. I hope he does get the chance to play it for hernone day, maybe next year on her birthday?
I am glad they are starting to feel more comfortable communicating with each other.
| JazzyAbby chapter 13 . 6/13/2011
So sweet that he wrote her a song...i wonder if she will have to wait for Edward to play it before she hears it.
Looking forward to Bella's reply.
| xrxdanixrx chapter 13 . 6/13/2011
For prison pen pals, they're so cute. You can tell they're going to have a meaningful relationship.
I've sent quite a few people over to your story and they're all loving it, as am I, so keep it up, lady! ;-)
| Insert Fangs Here chapter 13 . 6/13/2011
awesome.. i love forward to a chapter of this story everyday... it makes my day
| natalayx chapter 13 . 6/13/2011
LOFBNSKJRI I JUST CAN'T. THIS CHAPTER SERIOUSLY MADE MY HEART FEEL LIKE IT WAS FILLED WITH SUNSHINE AND RAINBOWS. IT MADE MY HEART MELT.
I say this every time. But I don't care, it is so fucking adorable how much he cares for her and how he feels when she says she cares about him.
Edward purchasing a bicycle... LOLOL That reminds me of Tybert in Remember Me. HAHAHAHAHA.
Awwww, listen to him being all sorry about offending her for not wanting to impose on her.
HIS BIRTHDAY PRESENT. OMFG, THAT IS THE SWEETEST THING. "It represents what you mean to me" ... -IT REPRESENTS WHAT YOU MEAN TO ME- HOLY FUCKING BATMAN, I JUST CAN'T... GOD HELP MY HEART BECAUSE IT IS FAILING FROM TOO MUCH CUTENESS RIGHT NOW!
"Maybe someday you'll let me play it for you" - UM, YES. YES HE WILL. WELL, HE BETTER. YOU BETTER LET HIM PLAY IT FOR HER. DO NOT BE AN EVIL TROLL. Please? :)
OKAY. YOU ARE AMAZING. YOU ALREADY KNOW THAT. I FLOVE YOU BEYOND ANYTHING IN THE WORLD.
Can't wait to see Bella's reply, OMFHGDUWHJKHWD SERIOUSLY, I JUST CAN'T!
| pilotnana chapter 13 . 6/13/2011
OOZAAAAAAAA! this letter is so good, it hurts! I cannot even start to tell you how much I adore(style) Prisonward! "you have made a difference in my life. You make me feel like I matter, like I'm a human again." This. This goes straight like an arrow to my bleeding heart *sniff* "I'm enclosing four pages of sheet music. It's something I wrote for you. It represents what you mean to me." If Bella doesn't fucking swoon over this, really I just have to jump inside the pages of this fic and slap her sensless. All the slow little steps Edward is is changing, and he is already different from the man we first met in chapt 1. Bella's influence is so strong already. Really woman, you make them feel so real, and alive, I forget I am reading a fictional story. I forget that is you, writing their lines. Gha.. AMAZING! xxx
| MinaRivera chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
I think this time Bella never made it to the car...
| Pyejammies chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
Good, Edward sounds more hopeful now.
| mimimgr chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
think that's a beautiful present. very personal. thoughtful to give her something.
| Bammers chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
He's so sweet thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can...
| sandraev1 chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
Aww he wrote her a song, that's so nice and sweet of him, thanks!
| Madmum chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
Loved this chapter. He wrote a piece of music for her. How sweet.
| 2203820 chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
I started reading this cause xrxdanixrx rec'd this on twitter. I love this story so much! It's so unique :)
Thanks for writing and sharing. I look forward to reading more
| LaMomo chapter 13 . 6/12/2011
I swear, he gets cuter every time...