Reviews for Inside Man
Succubus630 chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
I feel like a douche because I only seem to review on the EPOV letters, but then I remember that this version of E is fucking brilliant and B is so far pretty run of the mill B. Now if it turns out she really does end up being Jake then I'll go back and review those chapters looking for clues...
Barbr9 chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
Awwww see I knew he fell for her a little with her last letter. He thinks she is as beautiful as her personality.


Mouthwatering chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
Love it.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
I love how you've made him come alive, completely jaded and skeptical, but in an endearing way.


nicekittyrawr chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
Aww Edward, I just want to hug you.

Love that he tries to encourage Bella so much.

It's so sad that he can't receive packages :( Everyone needs some Funfetti.

I think he'll do great "on the outside". It seems he's started building a friendship.
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
love this. Can't wait to see where it goes & builds!
meadow11 chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
I just can't get enough of your story- love the letter format so much. always looking forward to the next one...
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
loving this
leigh1080 chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
I LOVE this Edward! I ache for him! Thank you for the update!
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 4 . 6/7/2011
Loving this story
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 5 . 6/7/2011
love this story
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
Love this
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 7 . 6/7/2011
I like that each chapter is a letter. It flows well. LOVE
MarchHare5 chapter 9 . 6/7/2011
Of course he's not going to say he's a pretty boy, LOLz, but I love that the nicest thing he says about his appearance is that he's toned. ;)

And what he says about her is so sweet. Aww.

Looking forward to being able to drop his guard. Eesh.
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