Reviews for Inside Man
Melany333 chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
loving it. Each letter gets a little longer
Just Me Alone chapter 6 . 6/6/2011
Well she is honest with him...what more can he ask for there? Loving it!
S1203 chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
Very interesting. I like it a lot. There are lot of difficulties in his life. Cant wait progress of strory. Thank you. :)
jeannettecullen chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
The letters are getting interesting i am enjoying reading them can't wait for Isabella's reply to this letter i really like that you are replying as fast as you are can't wait for the next update.
ClancyJane chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
my heart just breaks for him... a half way house or shelter - you have me going out to donate to those places that are local to me : )
seevousplay chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
still loving this so much. I like that they're still being cautious but are getting more familiar. seems more realistic this way.
ECullen50Shades chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
I wonder if she will send a picture in the future? He's bound to be smitten if she does!

xoxo
ECullen50Shades chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
I think he should buy her chocolate Pop Tarts!

xoxo
Bammers chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
Loved it very much thanks for sharing this and I wonder what she will say to him about the last question Will she just tell him or will she add plain boring or the color of dirt To me it tells you alot about a person just by asking them to describe themselves update when you can thanks...
Always so stubborn chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
I love this plot! Thank you for sharing with us your great ideas. Can B send E money and things like stamps and stuff? Wouldnt it be cool if the two fell in love and E moved in with B. Guess I will have to wait and see. Looking foward to the next update.
mdf chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
will she respond to the " what do you look like" question? sorry i didnt review earlier but i didnt get the last 2 updates dont know why.
mdf chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
she has so many questions.
ecullen'sgirl chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
Edward has revealed a lot about himself and his upbringing in this letter. He was apparently abused by his father and his mother allowed it and/or didn't take him and leave this situation. I think Edward wants to have a wife and family. He has accepted that he committed a crime and deserved the punishment. He has been through counseling and benefitted from it. I wonder if Edward got his bachelor's degree while he was in prison? I love that Edward moved right into addressing the letter to 'Bella'. The life Edward described in prison is bleak, you have to hand it to him that he has made the best of his situation. I hope he is paroled soon. And I notice his signature has changed now to 'your friend on the inside'. Oh, he wants to know what Bella looks like, and he's asked if she has a boyfriend or children. They are getting to know each other slowly. Love this story!
pilotnana chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
The best letter so far. I really wish I could be one anon writer and send him 1000 letters and a box full of Pop-Tarts.. There is a special kind of intimacy in writing letters. I think you can create a connection with a stranger through words even if it s easy to project your own desires/ideals over that person. He imagine her having a little brother or a pet. She is already loving and protective in his eyes. The final ps is perfect ( in a very not creepy way). Thanks for writing xxx
ecullen'sgirl chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Another great chapter. I love Bella's honesty in telling Edward exactly why she has left out identifying details. Also the questions she asks Edward are honest and direct; how do you earn money, can you watch TV whenever you want, how big is your jail cell and do you have to share it with another inmate? Again I read the chapter on the blog site and am reviewing here. I love the blog, it's so realistic with Bella's swan stationery and Edward's notebook paper. You are brilliant with both the story and the presentation!
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