Reviews for Inside Man
mdf chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
she has so many questions.
ecullen'sgirl chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
Edward has revealed a lot about himself and his upbringing in this letter. He was apparently abused by his father and his mother allowed it and/or didn't take him and leave this situation. I think Edward wants to have a wife and family. He has accepted that he committed a crime and deserved the punishment. He has been through counseling and benefitted from it. I wonder if Edward got his bachelor's degree while he was in prison? I love that Edward moved right into addressing the letter to 'Bella'. The life Edward described in prison is bleak, you have to hand it to him that he has made the best of his situation. I hope he is paroled soon. And I notice his signature has changed now to 'your friend on the inside'. Oh, he wants to know what Bella looks like, and he's asked if she has a boyfriend or children. They are getting to know each other slowly. Love this story!
pilotnana chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
The best letter so far. I really wish I could be one anon writer and send him 1000 letters and a box full of Pop-Tarts.. There is a special kind of intimacy in writing letters. I think you can create a connection with a stranger through words even if it s easy to project your own desires/ideals over that person. He imagine her having a little brother or a pet. She is already loving and protective in his eyes. The final ps is perfect ( in a very not creepy way). Thanks for writing xxx
ecullen'sgirl chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Another great chapter. I love Bella's honesty in telling Edward exactly why she has left out identifying details. Also the questions she asks Edward are honest and direct; how do you earn money, can you watch TV whenever you want, how big is your jail cell and do you have to share it with another inmate? Again I read the chapter on the blog site and am reviewing here. I love the blog, it's so realistic with Bella's swan stationery and Edward's notebook paper. You are brilliant with both the story and the presentation!
pilotnana chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
"Bella( that's what my friend call me)" I just felt a little bit in love *sigh*. Anyway I was thinking that if I was the one writing I would probably ask the same questions. And I would defenitely protect my privacy from a stranger..jail or not. I bet Edward was looking forward this letter..thanks again for writing (especially on awards night ;o)) xxx
HolyCoconut93 chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
this seems like itll become an amzing story once it continues! icannot wait to read more! please upload soon!
Burntcore chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
I wonder what her reaction is going to be to him seeking parole... perhaps she will fear that he will seek her out.
Burntcore chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Pop tarts - so random. Love it.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
LOVED the P.S. he wrote :) Wonder what she'll say!

Nic
chyygirl67 chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Until next time,

Bella (that's what my friends call me)

That's nice of Bella to do. I'm glad she is protecting herself and being honest with Edward too.
chyygirl67 chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
p.s. What do you look like?

I wonder what Bella will think of that?

Edward life is so sad, but he seems to be level headed at this point.

What is your update schedule? I live reading the handwritten letters on the blog but I cant access them with my iPhone :-(

Thanks for sharing your work.
lynne0731 chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
simple loving it!
chyygirl67 chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
p.s. What do you look like?

I wonder what Bella will think of that?

Edward life is so sad, but he seems to be level headed at this point.

What is your update schedule? I live reading the handwritten letters on the blog but I cant access them with my iPhone :-(

Thanks for sharing your work.
chyygirl67 chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
p.s. What do you look like?

I wonder what Bella will think of that?

Edward life is so sad, but he seems to be level headed at this point.

What is your update schedule? I live reading the handwritten letters on the blog but I cant access them with my iPhone :-(

Thanks for sharing your work.
pillow912 chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
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