Reviews for Inside Man
twlighttina chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
Awesome story I just read all chapters and am up today look forward for next update
pillow912 chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
great chapters!
seevousplay chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
*censor

still loving this so much. i'd like some of the german chocolate cake frosting please! haha.
brandylion chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
So, I stumbled upon this tonight and read through all of it. And having had several close family members serve juvie/jail/prison terms, this hits close to home. Edward's story breaks my heart, and while he's ultimately to blame for the actions that landed him in prison, it's still sad when good people make poor choices that wreck their lives. Anyway, all of that to say keep up the good work. I'm loving the story so far. (And I kinda like reading the "real" letters on your blog.)
M-isforPigtails chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
Bwahahaha ok now I'm picturing that Rob guy dangling from a tiny window.

Oh, cool chapter..
MilaSweetLips chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
I just found this story and love it so far. The letters between these two get more and more deep. So, hopefully, will Edward be released on parole by this year? Bella says she has an on and off relationship since last fall. Jacob? It sounds like the relationship sucks. She used to live with her dad so that rules out great sex life lol. I think Edward probably figured that out. Can't wait for what he says back.
gabs9 chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
Great chapter.
aswan86 chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
I loved the new chapter
SleepMyBella chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
You're awesome. Thank you!
badjujube chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
"You are very clever. Yes, my parents are divorced, and my mom still lives in Arizona." This is similar to that line in the last one about "You're a smart girl." These lines are so intriguing because they reveal an edge that these two have been dancing around. I might be reading too much into it but I read your stuff like a stalker and your characters are rarely just sweetness and light, YKWIM? So, two people writing to each other in this situation are going to be polite and careful but stuff will slip out. Sorry about the novel, I've been responding to reviews all night and sick of my own writing. It's nice to delve into someone elses, especially when it's this interesting! Thanks! JuJu
Bammers chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
Well she called herself average so she's your basic young adult with poor $ex life Proof on and off dating means the $ex sucks but I still need it every month or so LOL thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can...
badjujube chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
"You're a smart girl. I think you can put the pieces together." This is a really intriguing line, it could be innocuous and it could be pointed. I'm curious to see why he would see her with a younger sibling. Maybe the attitude of concern? Thanks! JuJu
badjujube chapter 6 . 6/6/2011
"Black and white striped jumpsuit"! LOL. I love her combination of thoughtfulness and naivete. I think you are doing a good job of writing this like a young psych major (I know many) who knows the right things to say but also doesn't, YKWIM? Thanks for sharing! JuJu
sessahhh chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
I was wondering when the "what do you look like?" question would come up and who would ask it first. Will your Bella actually answer? If I were her I think I would want to send some of those supplies. They're cheap on the outside in comparison, I'd imagine. I'm not sure if you can send stuff like that, or perhaps some poptarts. Bet he'd really like that. Call it a dozen birthdays.

It sucks to find out what he's implying with his past. No child deserves that.

Great job. Looking forward to the next one!
sessahhh chapter 6 . 6/6/2011
I love the sudden bombardment of questions at the end from her. I wonder which ones your Edward will choose to answer.
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