Reviews for Future of The Dark Lord
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 41 . 5/27/2014
This story was great and enjoyed it!

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!
BernerMom chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Great story! As dark as it was, it kept me captivated and I couldn't put bit down. I agree with others that some of the erroneous spellings could be distracting, and I almost felt you rushed a bit at the end (maybe because the end was in sight) and words were completely missed or used in error. Even with those, I thoroughly enjoyed the story and am very sad at how it ended. Very nicely done.
Aisha04 chapter 41 . 3/15/2013
This was an amazing story. Needs more reviews! Except for the odd wrong spelling it was brilliant
Night Vision1 chapter 41 . 12/27/2012
Wonderful Story! I didn't forsee that kind of ending at all. What a twisted and hopeful path you took us on. Really well done, truely enjoyed every chapter!
Kashi-Cookie-Monster chapter 41 . 9/28/2012
Wow, this fic ought to have more reviews; it is bloody brilliant! It is so original, and so well written it is epic! Awesome job,

Kashi-Cookie-Monster
xxx
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
cool start
Selene silva chapter 41 . 4/17/2012
Sad but beautiful... Congrats!
Guest chapter 41 . 1/31/2012
Omg...i loved this fanfic...not a lot of things can make me cry.
cindyflanary chapter 41 . 1/19/2012
I love this story!This is one of my favorite storys!
Harshbuttruthful chapter 5 . 1/12/2012
you need a BETA reader there are lots of spelling and grammatical mistakes in this story so far.
Rocky181 chapter 41 . 1/11/2012
Fabulous story!
Owltalon chapter 41 . 1/8/2012
omg! an amazing ending! so sad though /

are you going to write another fanfic(about HP?) or chapter after this?
sweet-tang-honney chapter 41 . 1/8/2012
great chapter.
Petite Mule chapter 41 . 1/8/2012
Thank you for this beautiful journey! Sad and hopeful end is so fitting for this emotionnal rollercoaster story! Just a question, if they have already Loly and John, and she's pregnant, doesn'it make it the "five" of them instead of the "four of us"? Thanks again!
aliasmel1 chapter 41 . 1/8/2012
Great story. Great ending, sad it is finished but oh well. ) I hope to read more fiction from you when you write another.
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