Reviews for First Try: Team 7
devildust chapter 23 . 7/8
why didn't jiraiya shave him bald though?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
white haired man pervert is suzume talked about jiraiya
Writing dreams into stories chapter 29 . 3/19
Sasuke please die. If you died the world would be at peace
Guest chapter 43 . 3/13
Great story in the end, the writing definitely improved a lot since the part 1. Thanks for the hard work.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/13
Wow...That Boy, That Man, The Bitch, I'm tempted to tell you to go back to grade school to learn better nouns, adjectives and descriptive phrases.
Roberto9090 chapter 12 . 1/19
se eu pego esse sasuke eu dou tanta porrada
Geust chapter 1 . 12/9/2020
I don't mean the story The person who started this was a bastard
I hate chain letters but I'm superstitious so don't read!;!

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next tén minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow
my 2 guys chapter 43 . 9/19/2020
that was great keep the chapters coming
DrFoggyPants chapter 17 . 9/11/2020
You know that anime trope where the shocked character has that "eh?" expression for multiple scenes, despite a long amount of time has passed. Yeah that kinda what I imagine Zabuza being like
Guest chapter 43 . 8/23/2020
good story. wish there was more.
guest chapter 43 . 8/6/2020
pity naruto didn't get to prank jiraiya with the green jumpsuit.
everything turned so serious i was missing the canon lightheartetness and humor.
guest chapter 28 . 8/6/2020
tent-stealing shinobi.. that was hilarious.
guest chapter 23 . 8/6/2020
this chapter made me greatly dislike jiraiya.
i'm a bit sad that kakashi didn't have a chance of a better relationship with naruto and i love tetsuo-senei and how he treated naruto.
but jiraiya just appearing and suddenly all is well somewhat pisses me off.
but at least sakura got some good attention here. that's very nice.
guest chapter 8 . 8/6/2020
so... basically for months naruto learned nothing besides that his teammazes were useless? urgh.
guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2020
had to laugh at the chapter title and how kakashi could only say something wise because somebody else came up with it.
poor naruto.
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