Excellent!

Such unimaginative fight, as most of the fights in this story are. Just vegue description with a jutsu thrown in here and there. Writer seems to prefer 'tell, don't show' principle most of the time, making it a rather unexciting read.

Even after two extra years of experience under his belt, Naruto is not much better than his canon rookie version.

love the possible but far fetched conclusions Sasuke's coming to

Well, I hope this Kakashi decides to take the training seriously, and not as slow as in canon where "tree walking in Wave" happened.

Good but it's sad that it remained so similar to canon.

"it looked to have had a previous owner who didn't seem to have used it that much, and some practical joker had sewn Uchiha Itachi's name into the collar."

Me: *Terio at Popeyes gif*

Poor naruto dealing with with pink haired harpy and duck ass uchiha.

Love the story!

This has been a joy to read

there's an error in this chapter.

ramen dudes eyes don't show like ever and also gaara would be dead if he saw them

that was great

Ayy naruto finally got his vest.

I don't know if jiraiya is as bad as satoshi but... it's an apt comparison, i suppose.

Yep.. naruto could have been gaara if he didn't find people who cared.