Reviews for The Rose garden
A Guy Named George chapter 8 . 10/22
I'm so sad this got abandoned, it was such a interesting idea. :'(
The Okama Way chapter 8 . 5/9/2014
Guest chapter 8 . 4/15/2013
You should continue this story! It's really great.
Nic Coay chapter 8 . 9/12/2012
You should really continue this. It's a great story and I actually really like the unique approach to who Chell is and how she met GLaDOS. Not to mention, your GLaDOS was fantastically perfect. Such an in depth look at how she became the sarcastic, bitter, and rather cold supercomputer we see in the games. Just great.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
I love this story sooo much. I wish you would update. It's an extremely unique look at GLaDOS that I find myself fascinated by.

Please, keep writing.
Jamiwami chapter 8 . 5/3/2012
Wow...I love what you've come up with here. I spent alot of my night reading this whole fic and I have no regrets whatsoever!

I never really thought much about GLaDOS being naive and quite innocent in the beginning, and even if I had, I wouldn't of imagined someone writing it so well. But you have. When I read GLaDOS's thought in this they feel like her. It's not just that you have taken away her sarcastic, nasty personality; You have actually made a real effort to develop her through each chapter in such a believable way! How she is such an intelligent being but also very young, still learning and growing. How her trust in her caretakers has slowly gone as she begins to see how they really are. They don't care for her at all. Because she's just a computer. I especially love that in the beginning of your story this wouldn't of bothered GLaDOS, but as she grows to accept her emotions( which is really depressing that she sees them as errors), she realizes that her needs matter and how she is being treated isn't right.

And it feels like things are about to turn lethal now with her testing addiction. I'm guessing her personality has already begun to twist with the amount of things shes had to deal with. It seems so overwhelming for poor GLaDOS that my chest hurts just thinking about it. I know this is going to end in tragedy for the humans inside Aperture, if of course you're going with canon which I'm sure you are. But it's really about how you get it there, and I just think you are doing a brilliant job with that. When GLaDOS first started to play with the buildings doors before employees came in; it was both cute and innocent but also scary just knowing that her control of everything is going to get terrifying pretty soon.

I love ChellDOS so I really look forward to how you handle the romance aspect of this as well. So far I've really enjoyed the interactions between them, and even GLaDOS's spying on Chell and seeing the woman making her feel calm is just adorable. Creepy but sweet. Just like GLaDOS ha ha :D It seems like things will get more interesting between them soon enough. I wonder how GLaDOS will treat Chell, considering that she likes her before going insane. Will she put her through testing still? These questions have me very nervous/excited!

Anyway, sorry for this massive long ramble, but hopefully it gets my feels out for every chapter because there all so wonderfully written! I see that it has been a little while since you last updated this fic, but I hope your still continuing this, it's gotten hold of my heartstrings quite tightly so no pressure! :P
NotProcrastinating chapter 8 . 5/1/2012
Please continue this! I'm really liking this story so far. I love these two together. w In the next chapter can you maybe add some fluff? Well if you want, its your story... But that'd be really nice if you did. c: I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Update soon~! :)
Strangeness chapter 8 . 4/5/2012
Are you updating this? I hope you are updating this. I love the story...very intense...and oh so interesting! Please keep up the good work. I would love to read more!
immo chapter 8 . 10/17/2011
GLaDOS is utterly charming. And Chell's reaction and empathy with the A.I.s' she encounters is really interesting to read. Please please do continue!
GLaDHal chapter 8 . 9/19/2011
a few errors but nicely written. i love it.
swimfeared chapter 8 . 9/18/2011
Uh oh looks like glados is turning into a monster. I like how you make it so glados is justified in killing the scientists . I mean thier abusing her!
Avarenda chapter 8 . 9/18/2011
Hmm i always kind of likened the 'reward' program to taking drugs. the first time you take it it's supposed to be intense, but eventually your body becomes used to it, and you need higher doses to get the same reaction.
Liber-T.E.A chapter 8 . 9/18/2011
Hmmm. Interesting. So Chell and GLaDOS are starting to befriend one another. Please continue.
Stray Sentinel chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I found this entirely by accident, but I'm glad I did. This story looks really interesting. Looking forward to more chapters! :)
Condor green chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
My thoughts are that I love this story.


Hope to see more.

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