|Reviews for Overslept|
| The Cretin chapter 11 . 8/23/2012
Good work on writing about the trust issue. So now it looks like the plot thickens. Someone sinister is looking at our favorite drow elf. Can't wait to read more. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 10 . 8/6/2012
(Takes Review in my arms) Thought the song was a nice touch ;) Your gift for imagery never ceases to amaze me. Likewise, great job with the interaction and dialogue. Off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
P.S. (Hands Review back to you) I think he did a doodle...XD
| The Cretin chapter 9 . 8/6/2012
Well I did enjoy this chapter. I think its cool how Kell is the one teaching Drizzt. I hate how Salvatore just killed him off. Always saw it as a cop out to a loose end. Well its also nice to see Drizzt somewhat opening up to the party. Off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 8 . 8/4/2012
Sorry to say my trek ends here for the time being but I will be returning to this. Its too good to pass up. You write Guen so well. Like you've tamed her. The tempo remains right. I'd work a little with the emotional portrayal. No offense but at times Kellindil's anger comes off more as hate. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 7 . 8/4/2012
OH GREAT JUST LEAVE ME ON A CLIFFHANGER WHY DON'T YOU...8D...;) LOL Cliffhangers are fun aren't they. Now were goin to flow. Nice job with the mayor. Wouldn't want to be in his position. Wouldn't want to be in the party's position either. They're in the middle of town with a drow prisoner after all. You peak my interest even more. Off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 6 . 8/4/2012
Great interaction on the part of Drizzt and Kellindil. You wrote their dialogue very well. Kept them true to character. Now I'm off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
Comes off as very realistic given the circumstances. I have to admire Kellindil's patience. I would imagine he above all of them (except for maybe Roddy) would take issue with Drizzt. Off to read another chap. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
I think you captured Drizzt's essence perfectly here. Ever had the boy just wanted peace. Nice job with Dove and her companions. Fitting that they too would take advantage of a chance for some fun in their hard lives. Off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
Sorry I've been gone. Getting ready for the coming school year. Great chap. Flowed right in line with the first two. While I despise him, you write McGristle well, keeping him in character. Likewise, great job with the others. I hated seeing Guen hurt but like you wrote she'll be back. Now off to read the next chap. Keep rockin
| Depressed Chibi chapter 20 . 7/31/2012
Okay, I have read all of your chapters in two days and I can safely say I'm hooked. This story seems truly great and I'd love for you to continue! I indeed always wondered what would happen if the two groups meet (especially Drizzt and Kell).
As a matter of fact, I was quite pissed when Salvatore killed him off. I was just like, 'God dammit, can't you at least let him have one elf friend?' Stupid bloodthirsty author. D:
But, all rants aside, this is truly awesome and I love it! As for your vote, I personally would rather keep Drizzt without a love life. Though, that may be because I've never been one for straight character pairings. But even with that aside, I find Drizzt/Catti-brie creepy...no matter how you look at it, it's cradle-robbing. : /
Alrighty, I'm sure you're tired of me talking, and talking, and talking. Cheers on the story!
| Tamuril2 chapter 23 . 7/30/2012
*blinks* It's...It's...It's over? *wails and falls to her knees* NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! It can't be! I...I need more...I want more!...*Drizzt comes over* Now, there, there. It's not all bad. *Tam sniffs* What do you mean? it's horrible. *Drizzt shakes his head* But don't you remember at the end she said there'd probably be a sequel to this? *Tam blinks* A sequel? *Drizzt nodes* Yes. *Tam gets and does silly dance* Yes! I'm so happy now! *Drizzt chuckles* Doesn't take much to cheer you up, does it? *Tam shakes head, grinning* Nope! I'm an easy person to please. Oh, I should tell Alti'uin what I liked about this ending chapter!
1)Aww, Alustriel was so sweet to Drizzt. She gave him a special gift and promise (in that he can come bakc any time). You wrote it so well that I even felt some NIF's (Nice INternal Feelings). Go you! You know, when you do the sequel, you're going to have to include Bruenor as well (because of the ring).
2)Ooo, the bad woman is Ellifain. I should've seen it coming sooner, but only saw it at the beginning of her scene this chapter. you're good, you know that? Huh? You do know it? Well! aren't we just prideful! lol. jkjk. I can't wait to see hwo you plan this out.
All in all, a great story. I'm sad it's over *sniffs* but i look forward to seeing the sequel. Thanks for taking me on such an enjoyable journey with this. Review III and I thank you very much. Keep up hte great writing!
| DemonsRun chapter 23 . 7/30/2012
You did good with the story. I'm hoping you continue, eventually, but I can understand completly the need to step back and take a break. Drizzt and crew can be tough characters to nail, but I think you did a very good job. I wish you luck with your stories, and I'll be keeping an eye out for more from you. :)
| showalittlefaith chapter 23 . 7/30/2012
Mwahaha I knew it! I knew it was Ellifain! This story is one of my absolute favorites of all time. Not only to I love the story, the plot and the characters... but you actually kept up with it. You made quick updates and they were good, no strike that, they were GREAT! I'm sad to hear that this is the end, but I understand it can't go on forever. I was looking forward to Drizzt running into the Companions of the Hall but I guess I'll have to wait on the sequel. I'm going to miss the emails I get saying that Overslept was updated but I thank you for all the time and effort you have put into it. Its no small feat to write such a long story! Give my thanks to your lovely Beta too! He must have worked pretty hard on this story. Well, I bid you farewell and may we meet again in your next story... wow was that cheesy or what! I am SUCH a dork! :)
| The Cretin chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Nice work with the detail and characterization. Ol'Roddy McGristle...dude reminds me way too much of a guy I know. I love that you show some things from Guen's POV. Can't wait to read more. Keep rockin
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
This idea appeals to me. Truthfully, I wonder about the "what ifs" when it comes to Drizzt. Don't worry about the descriptions for the characters...that's what imagination's for ;) I will be following up on this. I apologize for not finding it sooner. Keep rockin