|Reviews for Malamapono a hui hou|
| Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Great story! :)
| SeanJ chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Wow, that was beautiful, and sweet, and...aww! Loved it! Thanks for sharing!
| rivendellelve chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
That was interesting too read. I can't really decide how I feel about Steve's near-death experience but I like this fic
for some reason I now feel the need to find a bullet-proof body-suit for Super SEAL
| cytpotter chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Ahhhhhh! This time you made me cry! But in a good way! :) I really liked this...it was different from your other stories but very touching! I absolutely LOVE how you write Steve and Danny! I can hear their voices in my head as I read your words! CBS really doesn't know what it is missing out on by not having you write their stuff! Great job! Again! :)
| moonjat54 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Oh...this one was special. You made me get teary eyed...and I like it. That talk with his mom would have been everything I would think it would be. Very nice. I am so awed by your ability to show the emotion yet keep the characters totally right. Well done and thanks for the great story.
| nanichick5 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This could be read as slash or no?
| francis2 chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I like this, especially Danny's reaction in the hospital.
| elemental-sparky chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
What a great one shot. So great in fact I read it and came back later on in the day and read it again. Thanks for not letting it go and posting it.
| gymkidz2000 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
That was beautiful.
| Rogue Tomato chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I really love this story. I love the two-sidedness of it - one with Steve's point of view and one with Danny's - and how the slight differences between them.
Steve with his mom was just amazing. Steve was so.. human there... unlike the "Rambo" we always see. He felt more child-like and I loved that so much. Maybe it's because I have a boy of my own and could just relate to some of the interactions.
Great, great story! So glad Sockie "yelled" at you to "fix it" because the happy ending is very touching. :)
| SugarMuffin08 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing and making my day!
| MacCartney chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Oh, what a beautiful story. I think you've really outdone yourself this time.
| sherry57 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
If you had ended this at the end of the second part, I wouls probably have screamed at you to fix it as well! lol...As it is, it's a great story with lovely friendship and good whump in it. Thanks hon!
| pugdog11 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Another excellent story Cokie, thanks!
| Poohbear-29 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
AH, happy sigh...this was wonderful...loved the interaction between Steve and his mom and the Danny waiting at his side for him to wake up...excellent story...Winnie