Reviews for The star child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() on to camp |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think the storys doin good so far:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME!It's getter weirder! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start to a story, I'm looking forward to the second chapter :D You should get those grammar mistakes fixed though, as well as capitalising your title and improving your summary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOooohh! I really like it so far! You should update ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG Tash...Figuro...it is relly good... |