Reviews for The Midnight Masque
Restrained.Freedom chapter 33 . 1/10/2012
I had to google the note reference, and I did have my own suspicions confirmed.

But all I can say is that this has become so depressing that my enjoyment factor has plummeted.

Still, great emotion on the edge sort of thing.
Witchy Pixie chapter 33 . 1/10/2012
Star Wars reference!


Morzan...sue...I could see it...

And aww, those three little words! How cute! How stupid and anti-social and pure Murtagh to leave it in a note.

"Wacky names like Galbatorix and Morzan," I love that line so ebry much...

As always, you amaze.
IronMikeTyson chapter 32 . 12/31/2011
Nice little change from the norm. I don't normally like fics that paint Eragon as an idiot: I think CP did enough of that, But I'm not reading your fic for the Eragon parts anyway so it doesn't really matter. Great chapter. I hope you don't hook Eragon up with this girl; I'd rather he stayed single.
Witchy Pixie chapter 32 . 12/30/2011

So much.

The Domia al Wydra is lies! Lovely touch! wonderful. Is it bad that he's striking me as really attractive? Yeah, it is.

Moving onward.

You should write the cycle, not CP.

Although I do get slightly confused while reading occasionally, I always know you're going to wrap it into a fantastic ending.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 32 . 12/30/2011
Saphira is not there... but some girl is... *thinks*... hmm...

I am seriously wondering what you are planning to do with this whole marionette drama thing...

Whatever it is... count me in!
IronMikeTyson chapter 31 . 12/19/2011
We have touch down. Pumped for this update. The part where Arya kept repeating the fact that she had seen blood before made me laugh for some reason; and I laughed again when she said that she despised singing music: I do as well. Overall brill chapter. More tangible then the ones before it so to speak
Restrained.Freedom chapter 31 . 12/18/2011

Is the puppeteer sneaking into the scenes?... Hope not... That seems creepy, and a bit tacky too...
Owltalon chapter 30 . 11/23/2011
awesome! and i will look out for the one-shot! unless it's already out.. *goes to look*
Restrained.Freedom chapter 30 . 11/18/2011
You can't imagine how much that helps... in fact I plan to go back now and re-read last chap with that in mind...

Now for THIS chap... Looks at you with suspicious eyes... "Just what are you doing?"

All of these mundane and struggling thoughts Nassi entertains are absolutely G.R.E.A.T.! Fabulous, if truth be told. You have a way of letting characters demean themselves.

My personal inclination is to lift things up and edify them, but your work is so artful that I have to utterly enjoy it.

Great Job.

Does you hint that N was speaking to M at the end mean that somehow he is #69? O.O

And "Blue Rose"?... Gahh! I can't figure out what you are doing...

And "The Girl..." knowing you, it could be absolutely anyone... N, A, or another... so I can't even guess. {Can't wait to see though.} XD
Owltalon chapter 29 . 11/16/2011
pretty good chapter! can't wait for the next one! :D

ooh i haven't read Inheritance yet.. i'm going to get it next tuesday after finals are done.. so i don't get distracted.. xD
IronMikeTyson chapter 29 . 11/12/2011
Yep, Inheritance played out like a badly written fanfic, I read some snippets copied directly from fics. It was quite predictable and the more interesting people like Tenga and co were barely mentioned; not to mention the fact that Murtagh played out like some 5 year old pawn of evil. This is why we have great fics like yours. I was worried you know: I thought you were going to stop writing this. Glad you didn't.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 29 . 11/12/2011
Well, I must have gotten lucky with the last chapter... cause this chappie had my head spinning. I have NO CLUE what is going on... where one character or scene begins and ends...

I have NEVER had tripping dreams like this one.

Can you help me with this? or am I just supposed to be treading water below the the surface?


Wonderful imagery, but I do wish I understood what was real...
Witchy Pixie LoggedOut chapter 29 . 11/12/2011
"You know why..." i found your pun.

This as epic, and leaves me wondering...for some reason, it reminds me of "The Shining."

Keep it up!

How did you like Inheritance, by the by?
Miss Calculation chapter 28 . 11/11/2011
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I enjoy reading, and writing, unhinged characters. They're so much fun.

Saviikins chapter 28 . 11/10/2011
This is so, SO much better than the books. I salute you. o

Also, guess who. ;)
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