Reviews for Thoughts
vanillla cake chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I never actually read a story like this (a story written in second-person) before. It was good, great job! :D
claraowl chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Second-person fics are so rare, I love 'em when I find 'em, but hae loads of trouble writing 'em.

Aww so cute XD
AmeHimeTori chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Cute. :3 Nice work.
thelovelaced chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I really like how the story was written in second person, but it took a while to get used to.
the evil it chapter 1 . 6/3/2011

sooooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!

i like this sooooooooooooooo muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch.
RakkiiHappiiDokkiiShidonii chapter 1 . 6/3/2011

I love the point-of-view you wrote this in. I've only ever read one other story that was written like this. Yo did a really good job with it. :)

Nagihiko. Nagihiko. Nagihiko. Y U SO NAGILICIOUS? XD

...I feel really really really really really really really bad because I still havn't finished your birthday fic, and your birthday was MONTHS ago. ;-;

I'm horrible. So why do I have such great internet friends? QWQ

Thanks, Haruka, for the cute Rimahiko fic. Shidonii is happii. n.n *glomps* C:

Riri-chi chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I really love how you put this into second-person point of view so our imagination can be just a little bit more vivid. And it's a very simple yet cute one-shot. I really love your style of writing, Haruka. Happy Belated Birthday to Shidonii. n_n
KidTantei chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Wonderful. Your first try at second-person? WOW. YOU SHOULD BE PROUD. You did it well. :)

The ending was... hmm. I suppose it's okay, but I think you could've done better. I think the last sentence was a tad rushed, like you just wanted to quickly end it or something. But that's just my opinion which no one cares about XD

You know, now that I read that part again, it's actually good. I can't think of another way to end it. :3

Good job~!
Rikan is lazy chapter 1 . 6/2/2011

You've definitely improved! :D

Plus, the use of second-person was unique, especially when it's like the narrator is talking to Rima and can read her thoughts (which the narrator already did. XD)

Anyways, I meant it~ I love it~ *lessthanthree*

Keep writing and more power to you~ :D

def.trbl chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
that is sooooo cute! It sorta seem rushed to me but, keep up the good work!