|Reviews for Thoughts|
| vanillla cake chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I never actually read a story like this (a story written in second-person) before. It was good, great job! :D
| claraowl chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Second-person fics are so rare, I love 'em when I find 'em, but hae loads of trouble writing 'em.
Aww so cute XD
| AmeHimeTori chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
| TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Cute. :3 Nice work.
| thelovelaced chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I really like how the story was written in second person, but it took a while to get used to.
| the evil it chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
i like this sooooooooooooooo muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch.
| RakkiiHappiiDokkiiShidonii chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I LOVE THIS. ;-; THANK YOU, RUKA-TAN!
I love the point-of-view you wrote this in. I've only ever read one other story that was written like this. Yo did a really good job with it. :)
Nagihiko. Nagihiko. Nagihiko. Y U SO NAGILICIOUS? XD
...I feel really really really really really really really bad because I still havn't finished your birthday fic, and your birthday was MONTHS ago. ;-;
I'm horrible. So why do I have such great internet friends? QWQ
Thanks, Haruka, for the cute Rimahiko fic. Shidonii is happii. n.n *glomps* C:
| Riri-chi chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I really love how you put this into second-person point of view so our imagination can be just a little bit more vivid. And it's a very simple yet cute one-shot. I really love your style of writing, Haruka. Happy Belated Birthday to Shidonii. n_n
| KidTantei chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Wonderful. Your first try at second-person? WOW. YOU SHOULD BE PROUD. You did it well. :)
The ending was... hmm. I suppose it's okay, but I think you could've done better. I think the last sentence was a tad rushed, like you just wanted to quickly end it or something. But that's just my opinion which no one cares about XD
You know, now that I read that part again, it's actually good. I can't think of another way to end it. :3
| Rikan is lazy chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
...DAMN. I LOVE IT.
You've definitely improved! :D
Plus, the use of second-person was unique, especially when it's like the narrator is talking to Rima and can read her thoughts (which the narrator already did. XD)
Anyways, I meant it~ I love it~ *lessthanthree*
Keep writing and more power to you~ :D
| def.trbl chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
that is sooooo cute! It sorta seem rushed to me but, keep up the good work!