|Reviews for Magix 4 Strangers|
| IceLilyLaura chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
Okay, one question aboout the last chapter- Who called her Kendra? Is she old enough to speak so she said it herself? I dunno, I'm confuzzeld.
Now, for this chapter:
I liked how you edited it. Very unique.
But why did Tails bring her to his 'Lab'? Wouldn't they just go to Cream's house so Vanilla could bandage her up? Or was his house closer? I've never heard of Tails being a good nurse, but.. whatevs XD
Can't wait for chapter 3 :)
| IceLilyLaura chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
This beginning was pretty good, but one thing: You may want to use the litte line-thingy (It looks like - up in the corner when editing on FF) to separate different parts. Also, It was a bit confusing how 'Kendra' just jumped up and attacked Eggman.
First it said Richard and Rosalie could do nothing.
Then she says 'Do something.' And he does.
It kinda confused me.
But I look forward to seeing the rest of it.
Remember: You don't have to update daily, but try to update at least once a week. :)