|Reviews for The Pieces of My Heart|
| Dixxy chapter 5 . 1/10/2014
Aaaaaaaaaaaaah, finally an update from one of the few TT author(esse)s i've been following close for quite some time now ! I began to doubt that ya and 1-2 others had perhaps dropped the TT
franchise for good (after all, didn't ya say yourself, at the beginning of previous chappy, that ya had lost interest in the Teen Titans ?)... So, fair wondering, eh !
But pleased 2 C you're still somehow involved in this very nice lil' story here ! I'm relieved ! :D
Okay, well, wasn't there plenty in this one ? Moving moments with Rae & BB, painful moments with the same two (was it really THAT hurtful, what BB said...? Or is is merely the Goth being too sensitive ?), mysterious moment with the guy in the line, suspenseful moment at the end with the leader's return, and what his goal may be... When there's really much in a chapter, they say it can be for the best (fascinating puzzle) or for the worst (lack of homogeneity), but in your case, with this really interesting chapter, we're clearly in the first category : for the BEST ! 8D
So i'll clap my hands at such successful crafting, great sequel to last chapter's cliffhanger. You did awesome, and i'm really curious to see what's with that mysterious folk (which i suspect might be either directly related to Rae's internment or a villain of some kind she's found about in the last 2 years, while she was on her own) AND with Robin and his for-now-still, secret motivations.
Right, i guess i'll stay tuned and hope that ya'll update this really marvelous story before 2015, eh eh ! Fair teasing, right ?
Thumbs up once again, dear ! Ya rock !
| TeenTitangurl4ever chapter 5 . 1/8/2014
I think robin should see raven and beast boy. Or bump into them.
| Anna chapter 5 . 1/6/2014
Can't wait to find out why Robin is back and what Raven has been through.
| JasonVUK chapter 5 . 1/6/2014
BB and Raven YAY _ So many mysterious things. :O you've really got me eager to know what been going on. :D
| BartWLewis chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
Interesting to say the least. You hade a nice moment when Beast Boy mentioned the old team and Raven couldnt speak. You raise questions about who that dude in the cafe was, a good mystery.
| TheImaginativeFox chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
I liked this chapter, it was an easy read. But longer chapter with maybe some more detail would be good.
| BartWLewis chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
Really like the plot, cant wait for future chapters. Glad that Beast Boy found Raven.
| Dixxy chapter 4 . 3/18/2013
Hey there !
First, NO, the last sentence of this chapter doesn't bother, coz i don't imagine her strangling him...
This being said...
'tis a very nice, very well-written story, interesting, catchy, and with something i personally like :
some mystery, some "enigmacy" (yup, word doesn't exist... well now it does, as i just made it up ;)
BB trying to find his friends and not finding them... him spotting a cloak figure remotely, when he finished
counting for hide 'n' go seek... the vision of Rae in white hospital overall which vanishes after lightning...
the piece of white cloth moving in the wind from the corner of the building... the sound of footsteps
leaving short after... the dark figure observing him while he slept... and Rae finally appearing unexpectedly
in his hideout at the end... all these mysterious moments are so thrilling to read !
I'm enjoying this story a lot, and... i don't think ch. 3 was a filler. It rather swarmed with suspense, with
mystery (am i repeating myself, by chance ?). Maybe my fav' up to now.
Well, i can't but agree wz Mr. Atrocious abt stories left pending : this is one of the most unpleasant things
on FF, and God knows how many stories i liked have been postponed indefinitely. Just gotta hate it. So yeah,
i do know you're no longer absorbed in TT *cough* Hetalia *cough* but i still wish you will take time to go
on wz that very cool story. I mean, come on, they've just found each other again after so long, therefore
ya can't let us wait once more for months... that wouldn't be fair !
I hope to read some update on this story before... say, summer ? I know how young authors are awfully busy, especially wz studies, but still, i hope ya can find time to write on.
All in all, a very moving story, notably thanxxxx to the flashbacks sequence (love nostalghia & memories). And can't wait to know what happened to Rae during those previous years... although i have my lil' idea
on the matter.
Oh, and i dunno where BB hid his extra stash of tofu, duuuuuh ! XD
Thanxxxx again for this very interesting fiction ! Please don't forget about it : we're all waiting...! :)
*** Léo ***
| Mr. Atrocious chapter 4 . 3/16/2013
I'm glad you didn't stretch out his depressive loneliness for too long, and I don't mind the last sentence. I'm extremely jaded when it comes to fanfics now because I'm picky and the ones I actually like end up being abandoned or take months to update... I hope that won't happen to this one, because I don't have the patience or the interest to stick with stories that have inconsistent and lengthy hiatuses anymore. Not trying to sound rude, but it's happened enough that I just don't care anymore and I won't stick with it if that turns out to be the case. Otherwise, I enjoy the story so far.
| Shadico chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
YAY! Now we get to find out why she left and was hiding from BB, and why she finally showed up. CANT WAIT!
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Nice! It's was good! Update soon!
| Mr. Atrocious chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
It was enjoyable, but I also agree it could have been longer. Please don't take too long with he next one.
| Mr. Atrocious chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
I like it, it's kinda sad, but hopeful too. I hope it's future update schedule won't be too uneven.
| Shadico chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
Rae's in a psyche ward? Wha? Have BB find her already! This doesn't sound good at all.
| ACCOUNTWILLNOTRETURN chapter 4 . 3/21/2012
How DARE you be cruel and give me a cliffhanger! lol very nice story really liked it! please continue to update!