Reviews for The Everyday Unlearned
Wilube chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Wow that was really great! I really like the style of your writing it's really detailed. The story was great! :) x
Riley S chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
This was wonderfull and wonderfully written. You have a very good style of writting, you actually reminded me of one of my fav writters on here. please keep up the good work!
TigerJily08 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
By far, THE MOST CREATIVE CANON James/Lily fic I've read! :)

LOVE what you've done with the piece- situating each subject to somehow partake in their relationship. And the ending, I just melted.

Loved it! :)
robbstarkswoman chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
This was great

I like how you added the subjects, it was a nice touch.

:)
Souhait chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Soo, you just have a boy that said 'I'm not nothing'? Wow -

Brilliant *-*
lilalex13 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I cannot believe that this is in fact your first fic! You are amazing! I loved it...and I've been around for awhile and read horrible stories to decent ones...and I must say this is perhaps one of the best ones I've read! Loved the forbidden fruit theme, and the fact that they're both flawed (as human beings are) I cannot wait to read more of your stories (no pressure! haha) Keep up the great work! :D
AmeliaNior chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Can I simply say please? First fic really? That was great, I can't wait to read more from you! I have to say that my favorite part was the kiss, and not because they kissed but because it wasn't this perfect, thing I guess for lack of a better word. Lily and James were human with their flaws and even in this short story you were able to portray that! So yet again I can't wait to see what else you write, and would longer really be so bad? lol
sweetsouthernsarcasm chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Good story. :) Thanks for having correct grammer and making it neat; it's getting harder and harder to find a story like that. I like the plot. I like how she wants him, but doesn't. How at first, he's like the forbidden fruit. Oh, and I like your disclaimer, too. It made me smile. :)

~Maggie