ohoh. The Dramaaaa

…. The beginning reminded me of that song from Bambi then up rain mean doctor who… whyyyyy?!

NO, bro you can't just leave it like that, I need an ending, I crave it like Aria craves Ice-cream. You can't leave me hanging like this!

It's a real shame this story isn't finished. I enjoyed what was written so farwould've loved to see what would happen when Aria discovers the full story of what happened to Lexi.

Hope to read more soon.

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You should update and carry on with this

Please please update!

Well Lexi ain’t too smart is she

PLEASE TELL ME YOU PLAN TO UPDATE BECAUSE OMG I LOVE THIS. Aria is low-key a freak but I love her character and her inner voice, which is hilarious and potentially has a deeper part in this? Maybe?It is Twilight so you never know lol. But her relationship with Paul is great, and I love that it is slow going to get them together, most imprint stories have them banging it out like a week into knowing each other, which is great but not super realistic. I would like to see Aria and Jared get back to being close siblings again one day, I understand that he has pack duties now, but he never really apologized for never standing up for her when Paul would bully her. Thats pretty shitty of anyone, but especially a sibling. I am exited for Aria to know the truth and start hanging with the pack! I think she will really like Emily, and she would probably get along great with everyone else too. I would love to see her meet the Cullen's eventually too, they probably wouldn't know what to do with her hahaha. I am excited to see what Victoria plans to do with her! She clearly knows she hangs around wolves, and she was planning to turn her initially, so I'm curious to see if she stays interested in her. I really enjoyed this and I hope you update again soon!

I haven't read this in a while but honestly it is one of my favourite Paul/OC stories. Please update, we would all love to know what happens next!

Noooooooooo, not a cliff hanger! It was getting to the really good part.

NO. DON'T END IT HERE. IT'S TOO GOOD.

So wait? She forgives him just like that? It’s okay for him to act that way because it was her fault for mixing up the heart candies when she was five? FUCKING FIVE?!

I’ve been bullied before, though not in as severely as your OC has, but there is no fucking way I want to be anything civil with my bullies. Hell its been fucking seven years and I wish they all have suffered some way or another since then.

I am not entirely sure what happened... I really liked your character Aria in the few chapters before but now it’s like her personality has switched to one of those generic, constantly random, demanding, easily falling into dick sand OC’s. I’m a little disappointed, I thought she would be more cautious around Paul, I mean for a guy that had physically bullied her for years and within a span of a few months, they’re buddy buddies almost lovey dovey now? What about the relationship with her brother? Nothing seems to be consistent in this story

your writing is good but the feelings feel utterly forced the jealousy the worry wouldn't happen so quickly I guess u haven't been bullied in real life it feels like u r using the magic of imprinting or something to make her like him it's utterly loathsome and he hasn't atoned for anything good luck with your future stories