|Reviews for Opportunities|
| n00dl3gal chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
CheckmateShipping and RebelShipping FTW!
| Grey-Hearted Hero chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
I usually don't read hurt/comfort fics, but I'm glad I made an exception here.
Very well written. I especially liked the flashbacks.
| MegaTJ chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Very nice. I'm glad there are stories like this around. You've just given me inspiration. Thank you for this story.
| Teenage Pokemon Fan chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Thank you for writing this! I love this pairing but there are like 3 fics with it on the ENTIRE INTERNET! And this it the only good one!
| Shinigamiwillrule9 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Wow this was really good. Quite honestly, grammar and stuff never bothered me, and in that area you actually did pretty well.
9-1/2 out of 10
| MonsterHunterXD chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I love the story, and I love the pairings. Fantastic work!
| Mijumaruwott chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
RALI. Read and liked it.
| Emperor Andross chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I liked it, it was very cute.
| WWII Historian chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Aside from the number of grammatical mistakes (Ex: spacing, wording, spelling, etc), this certainly a well paced and written story. You give these characters some backstory and even develop them at a reasonable pace. It certainly pulled some heart strings, which is something considering that I tend to work with my mind more than my heart.
So until next time,
| ImaginationFlow chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Author's note at the top: you wrote "after failing to find AND stories..." shouldn't it be any?
"Didn't you like Whitlea too?" she asked curiously
Where's the full stop?
"I might as well give in and showyou who..."
"I bet that you were just going
along with it..."
Why is there a new line in the middle of speech?
ANYWAY, apart from that, it was quite interesting, despite me never playing Pokemon Black/White. You didn't rush it, which was good, and much better than me.
Basically, BON TRAVAILLE! :D