Reviews for A Murder
SnowKiter chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Ah...

I apologize, but I really, really had trouble reading and comprehending that...

(Is English your first language?)

Well, Steven being a criminal is a...interesting and creative concept! .;;

You really, really need to work on your mechanics though. Perhaps you should type with spell check?

Also...I'm not sure I understand the title of this...story...

Yeah, I think that's all I'm able to say...have a nice day and keep writing~! .