Reviews for Before I Fall to Pieces
LtTanyaBoone chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
"What are you talking about; you're sticking your joystick in that female gamer"

I couldn't stop laughing at this, that euphemism is so... ABBY.

Also, *Tim* being the one to freak out at commitment? Nice change.
stamper55555 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I thought it was really good. And I like the term "word vomit"
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Good first trek into McAbby land!

I always get the feeling he's more into her than she is into him, in a romantic way but this story works very well.