|Reviews for Gunpowder Ablaze|
| AvaEobane chapter 6 . 12/28/2011
Good story so far but Roy should just tell her. It always makes everything worse when he stays silent about his feelings.
| hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
Aww poor Roy. I think I'm gunna cry too. :'(
| Tigrette-of-Fire chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
Nicely written! I found myself trying to retain laughter at roy and riza's embaressment. It was pricless and in Riza's case much more than Roy's, sweet in its own unique way; and roy scolding himself gave me this image of him telling himself: "Bad Roy! Bad! No!" In contrast, i really felt my heart reach out to the both of them during various flashbacks throughout the fic and when riza was in pain. Very well described! Keep on writing. I love this fic.
| hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
Oh so awkward.
Poor Roy. Poor Riza.
Too bad Riza's got a bunch of wounds. If she didn't I'd say "Just do it already!"
I love the story so far. Please update soon.
| Ramen Time chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
damn, big change in mood. you're
very good at keeping everyone in
character. i also like where youre
going with the story. thankx for
the update and i cant wait to see
what happens next! :)
| Ramen Time chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
mighty fine read i stumbled upon! lol
i really like this story and i hope you
update it soon!
| OwlCookies XD chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Uhmm... it was good until like the last... 3 or so paragraphs O.o