Reviews for Gunpowder Ablaze
AvaEobane chapter 6 . 12/28/2011
Good story so far but Roy should just tell her. It always makes everything worse when he stays silent about his feelings.
hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
Aww poor Roy. I think I'm gunna cry too. :'(
Tigrette-of-Fire chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
Nicely written! I found myself trying to retain laughter at roy and riza's embaressment. It was pricless and in Riza's case much more than Roy's, sweet in its own unique way; and roy scolding himself gave me this image of him telling himself: "Bad Roy! Bad! No!" In contrast, i really felt my heart reach out to the both of them during various flashbacks throughout the fic and when riza was in pain. Very well described! Keep on writing. I love this fic.
hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
Oh so awkward.

Poor Roy. Poor Riza.

Too bad Riza's got a bunch of wounds. If she didn't I'd say "Just do it already!"

I love the story so far. Please update soon.
Ramen Time chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
damn, big change in mood. you're

very good at keeping everyone in

character. i also like where youre

going with the story. thankx for

the update and i cant wait to see

what happens next! :)
Ramen Time chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
mighty fine read i stumbled upon! lol

i really like this story and i hope you

update it soon!
OwlCookies XD chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Uhmm... it was good until like the last... 3 or so paragraphs O.o