|Reviews for Clan Building|
| Dark Horse Writer chapter 7 . 5/17/2012
Nice to see you post again in this fandom, and yes I am still reading stories. Anyways, interesting to see that the clans are trying to force Dave to see them.
| Dark Horse Writer chapter 6 . 6/28/2011
Well let's see did I see this coming? No, to be honest I did not.
But I could see this happen more likely than your last chapter.
Balthazar...plastic soles...IPHONE? What?
| Dark Horse Writer chapter 5 . 6/28/2011
Balthazar modernized? No trench coat? HE NEEDS THE TRENCH COAT! Sorry, couldn't resist.
A SUV really? Come on be economical here!
| Dark Horse Writer chapter 4 . 6/19/2011
Oh dear I think Dave would be overwhelmed with the necklace...
Who's the man with the box?
| Dark Horse Writer chapter 3 . 6/15/2011
Hot piping fresh, and glazed with chocolate! How did you know!
Anyways, good chapter and interesting battle of the mind. A kid Balthazar...cute :)
Anyways, this will be an interesting story.
| Dark Horse Writer chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
Back with another story I see?
So, Balthazar has his sight restored? Interesting...but I thought he hated it?
And what is with the prologue, huh? I mean seriously that doesn't make any sense. I guess in time it will then?