|Reviews for Being Dysfunctional Has Never Been So Much Fun|
| loli chapter 284 . 6/5/2014
i really hope you update this fic one day :c its jusr really good
| YFIQ chapter 40 . 12/30/2013
All and all, Asune's plan is an insane troll logic.
| YFIQ chapter 6 . 12/10/2013
Still not as bad as necrophilia...is it?
| YFIQ chapter 156 . 12/4/2013
You know it's bad when even the Chiester sisters were grossed out.
| Flor De Nyx chapter 225 . 11/17/2013
I simply love this story, and think your writing is wonderful. Please keep up the good work!
| totaldile chapter 284 . 11/13/2013
My oh my, I believe I read all of those in precisely one sitting. Absolutely fantastic, your portrayal of almost all of these characters. In particular, I feel like you've done a fantastic jobs at portraying the Stakes and Ange. I've really enjoyed all those segments, particularly the multi-chapter ones. Gaap and Virgilia are extremely amusing, also, and you do a fantastic portrayal of them too.
Also, you've turned me into a Beelzebub x Ronove shipper.
I'm not sure if you wrote those segments in jest, or whichever, but my goodness, I don't think I can ship either of them with anyone else now. Ever.
/there goes battler x ronove
Aha, if you're ever stuck for ideas, I would love to see some more Lambda and Bern, Erika and Dlanor, as well as Ange and the Stakes.
I do have one slight criticism though, if you don't mind. I'm also a fan of your character study of Bern, and I feel as if you portrayed her and Lambda a little more realistically there (perhaps it's because it was darker, but it doesn't need to be...). I feel as if Bern's just a little too kind/jealous, and Lambda just the slightest, slightest bit too...perky? Attention-seeking? It's nothing major at all, but something just felt a liiiittle off when I read the stories surrounding them. I hope you don't mind me saying so.
Regardless, you've done a fantastic job portraying all of these characters, with little to no departures from their 'in-character' states. Excellent work!
I hope you do decide to continue this story indefinitely, though. I'll miss these if they end at 300.
| anon chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
could you write something fluffy Erica x Bern, please? :-)
| Zatroopa chapter 284 . 11/6/2013
Goodness, it's been a while since this was updated. Definitely a pleasant surprise, even if I feared Rosa going over the edge, never a nice thing to read even within the VN itself.
Hope I don't sound rude but are you still open for requests? I understand if you want to put your own ideas on paper, or on a document file to be accurate, however I am curious about if you're happy to do them or not.
| RainfallSeven chapter 284 . 11/6/2013
Yay you're alive I look forward to more updates
| Anon chapter 284 . 11/6/2013
Really great to see this back, I was worried that you stopped writing altogether.
| Fan Of Games chapter 284 . 11/6/2013
It's great to see this collection back in action! I'm definitely looking forward to reading the next sixteen one-shots for Dysfunctional! Keep up the good work and good luck!
As for this one-shot, it was pretty nice. I know Rosa isn't very fond of Halloween as much as Maria is, but I think she made a good decision to give the holiday a try after the old lady gave her another perspective on it.
By the way, are you going to take suggestions for one-shots again? I still have some Ange & Asmodeus one-shots I haven't written yet since you last updated this collection, so I can give you the shortest idea I currently have if you're interested in doing it.
Also, if you want, feel free to read and review the Umineko stories I've published and the three one-shots of I Can't (I Can't Read, I Can't Go Into A Woodshop, and I Can't Cook) you may not have read yet.
| ncfan chapter 284 . 11/5/2013
Yay, you've decided to keep on with the collection! This was a great chapter; of course Maria would want to carve one of Beatrice's butterflies, and I bet the design came out great, but of course Rosa probably didn't appreciate it at all. And I hope you'll be able to get to 300, but don't strain yourself too much, please; it'll just become a chore.
And I bought the Umineko and Umineko Chiru discs over the summer! I've just finished with the first four arcs; I knocked out the last twelve hours or so (okay, so it wasn't EXACTLY twelve hours; it just felt like it, and I kept getting interrupted) of EP4, staying up until about three in the morning (when you don't take daylight savings into account) on Saturday night. I should have been doing schoolwork, but I feel no shame. I guess what I want to say is that having the chance to read the original visual novels really taught me how true to the tone of them your work is. These really feel like something written by Ryukishi.
| YFIQ chapter 17 . 8/3/2013
The weakness sounds kind of familiar.
I wonder why *grabs 45's ears*
| YFIQ chapter 16 . 8/3/2013
Well, the link is dead or the picture's gone.
Still a nice short and a good read.
| YFIQ chapter 7 . 8/1/2013