Reviews for Beginning to Question
babiluv22 chapter 34 . 8/13
I hope you finish one day
BillBrink chapter 15 . 7/12
I want to tell you that I have a concern about starting stories when I see Harry/Multi in the summary, as so many of them are written by teenage guys and are essentially porn without plots. However I took a chance on this one seeing that it featured the three best female peers of Harry. Each of the girls have a lot to pair them with Harry; Hermione has the muggle background and the brains to help him succeed outside, Daphne has the pureblood background and brains to help him succeed inside, and Susan has, not only a pureblood background and brains, but her connection with her aunt to help him deal within the ministry. In addition, they are all three beautiful. That you have moved the plot slowly and given Harry a lot of preparation for the coming battle with Albus just builds the tension to a very interesting story without it falling into another PWP.
I can see you haven't worked on it for awhile, but I think it would be a shame to let this one go without completing it. Your talent shines through here. Thank you for sharing what you have.
DarkishWhiteLord chapter 10 . 7/10
A foursome...
DarkishWhiteLord chapter 7 . 7/10
You're telling me that Hermione is bisexual...
Gostwolf92 chapter 4 . 7/7
Love the story
Sophia Marsh chapter 1 . 6/30
This is the best Harry Potter story in the world.
Guest chapter 34 . 6/29
Nice to see you have started writing again. How about restarting this?
keitaropurple69 chapter 34 . 6/28
I love this story and it is very original, but i hope you will come back and finish it.
Okami no Shinigami chapter 34 . 6/18
While it's sad to see an amazing story like this go on hold I understand that life is never easy or fair take the time you need to settle and if for any reason you can't get back the inspiration you can always put it up for adoption so that others can try their hand at it I myself can see 3-4 possible endings for it. I hope to see more of you inspiring work soon. Ja Ne.
Time Emperor chapter 2 . 6/10
I like this story, but people don't talk like that. Way too many 'also's'. give people room to speak. inergect on someone else's monolog. Lay low on the drugs there, yeah?
Dr1zzy chapter 34 . 6/1
Sorry to hear about your r father first and foremost . But I do wish u get your Grove back for this story it would be a damn shame if it was never completed. If u need help bouncing ideas for the story just pm . That's all from me thx for the story
Dr1zzy chapter 30 . 6/1
Good choices on animagius
Dr1zzy chapter 28 . 6/1
The great escape undead another bloody brilliant move you certainly are talented in my humble opinion
Dr1zzy chapter 26 . 6/1
I really thought the changes u propose for Hogwarts were brilliant ! Well thought out
Dr1zzy chapter 18 . 6/1
Awesome story so far ! I really like the mature way harry is handling all this and that he is more then willing to take good advice the mark of a great leader!
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