Reviews for Moroi Princess
shadow-kissed angel chapter 17 . 1/6/2013
Great story... but you could've drawn the whole Jesse thing out a bit, like being raped and abused and then having the guy come back should be traumatizing.. and I think the last few chapters should have more thoughts and feelings from Rose like when she was told she was marrying Adrian it was all action no sadness or thoughts or anything well really good story . UPDATE SOON!
BBSweetie chapter 17 . 12/4/2012
Whereve u been?
Deesyre chapter 16 . 8/25/2012
DJVera chapter 17 . 8/16/2012
Please finish this story! I love it! :)
vampiregirl2014 chapter 17 . 8/1/2012
Will you ever finish this story?
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
Honestly, you have potential, but you rush you're stories. Why would Rose just jump to the conclusion of Tasha and Jesse working together to get her? And if Dimitri died I'm pretty sure you should definitely explain more about that. You have to explain how Rose felt and you need to explain more about how spirit works and stuff like that. If i was rating this from 0 to 5, i would give it a two and a half. And that's being generous.
VampireGirl1200 chapter 17 . 2/1/2012
Omg you have to add on realy fast cuz this story is really good even though rose isnt as brave anymore.

P.s. i like story 1the best!xD
loventherussian17 chapter 17 . 11/6/2011
great chapter loved it update soon and i chose 1 and 4 for the new story
Forever Winter chapter 17 . 8/12/2011
great job
dest-unknown chapter 17 . 8/12/2011
story 1. most definitely
lovingbites chapter 17 . 8/12/2011
Aww Dimitri would totally pown Tasha. Can't wait for the next chapter.
drarryfanatic47 chapter 17 . 8/12/2011
Tbh...i really like the first two and would eventually like to see them both on the site. But i have to pick the second, adrian and dimitri two soul mates. Could it please be a rose/adrian story?
Lesya17 chapter 17 . 8/12/2011

i think it's good that their will be only 3 chap's left. Then i think u will find a great end :D

And i would love to read the first story, it sounds like a pretty amazing idea ;DDD

And the chap: It's really good, they're a family now, a real family. It's so lovely when Dimitri holds his daughters 3 :)

But then the bitch Tasha had to come and ruin everything!

I hope Dimka will survive :(

He has to!
xPocketfullofFreakingSunshinex chapter 17 . 8/12/2011
Aawwww how sweet! I like number 4 Please update soon!
Kira-Alis chapter 17 . 8/12/2011
you absoultly have to do story number 1 but if you had spare time do story 4 too
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